Click Here!

Reviews for The Fortress Within

By : idarakowsky
  • From ANON - Demonic Angel on January 10, 2003
    I must say I have truely enjoyed your story. Everything from Sirius proving to be no better then Lucius (go figure with who might be playing him in the next movie) to Harry and Ron finally getting what they deserve.
    Ever since you mentioned the potion in the classroom I have had my fears of what will happen with Hermione, please no don't do it.
    I understand how real life can get in the way and I anxiously await for you to to return to Sevie-verse (better than Potter-verse). Keep up the excellent work and I will definatly be checking back now and then for updates.

    BB,

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jenny on January 10, 2003
    No! No, no, no, no. no! I suddenly don't care about real life, real life smells. Real life means no more story and we don't get to find out what happens to Hermione and Severus! Pleh. Jenny wants more. Soon? Please!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MuseLucius on January 06, 2003
    Another great chapter. I was glad to read the battle scene. When you say it's not the end. Will there be a resolution between Severus and Hermione, I wonder? You know we all hope so. Can't wait for your next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - winter on January 06, 2003
    I just stumbeled across your story for the forst time today, and read all 18 chapters in one shot. My butt fell asleep around the fourth, but it was worth it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Just so you know, you need to work on when and where you put commas and question marks.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MuseLucius on January 05, 2003
    Nice twist with Hermione's revenge on Sirius via Lucius. I anxiously await your next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MuseLucius on January 04, 2003
    I've really enjoyed reading all of this fic in one sitting. Needless to say, I am anxious to read the next chapter. Very good duality of roles in Hermione. You write all of Snape's reactions in a very convincing manner. Interesting twists involving Harry and Sirius' characters. Please continue soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jenny on January 02, 2003
    This is beautifully written, I love it. I've read a few other stories with similar plots at other archives but none have been so convincingly written. The way you portay Hermione's emotions and the turmoil inside is excellent. I was given the link to this archive by a friend and started to read this story, I haven't been able to put it down. Well, maybe that's not quite the right phrase, but I'm sure you get the gist. I hope you write more soon, I'll definately be checking to find out what happens.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!