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Reviews for Eye of the Beholder

By : BlueSchmoo
  • From ANON - Andie Bubbles on May 19, 2004
    I started reading this long ago on fanfiction.com and am so happy I found the conclusion here! It is a wonderful story. I wouldn't change a thing. You did a fabulous job with the whole story. Congratulations!
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  • From ANON - sc on March 03, 2004
    oh! i don't want it to be over! well, anyway. i absolutely loved the last sentence! (and i'm really glad you made it a happy end) *sighs* i hope you'reng tng to write and post a new story! and at the risc of sounding pathetic: I'll really, truly and deeply miss sasha.
    stebu
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on February 26, 2004
    It's oooooooveeeer! Snif!
    OK, I think I would have liked a more explicit "outright passion"..)
    A)
    As for the epilogue, it was a little weird, because it was like being quite detached from all those reactions, and then, suddenly, the lines about Snape. Those were... wow! I was touched with a few sentences!
    I hope you will soon start another fic!
    Big hugs!
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 25, 2004
    mmeepp! *tear of happiness* that was a good ending. well as much as i complain that i want more i kwow this is the end. im sad but i'll just find another really long fanfic to get hooked on. congrats on ur amazing story. lots of love, carmen.
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  • From ANON - Silvana on February 24, 2004
    Beautiful story, Blue! I did notice a discrepancy in chapter 38. Severus calls her Miss Rathborn, her last name is Rowan. Only mistake I caught, though. *whispers* Better than some others, I must say. *winks* Ta!
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 23, 2004
    eeeepppppppp its over *tear*. i almost did cry but im stong, i will hold it togther. this fic has been amazing, it gave me something to look foward to after school. it really warmed my heart how severus cared for sasha and hope one day that kind of love will hapen to me, i wouldnt mind it being w/snape either.*laughs and abruptly stops and clears throat* anyways i just want to say thanx for writing it and emailing me to talk about it. i really truly apreciate it and good luck w/any other fics u de toe to write, i bet they'll b as wonderful as this one. *gives blueschmoo a big bear hug*
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on February 22, 2004
    Sigh in relief! Just a dream!
    OK, maybe that was not such a bad idea...
    Honestly, I really liked it. The dream was perfect with her situation. As when one is having a very thick sleep, and gets entangled in the sheets, and is unable to disentagled oneself; and the wand in her back; all mixed with her fears... Perfect.

    Well, well, well, wandering how people is going to react to her new face (I don't know why, I guess how Snape is going to react to her. But after my last "guess", I think I will shut up). And, more important, how her character is going to change now the look of the others is to be different. Will she still be interested in Severus?

    Hugs!
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  • From ANON - msmalcontent on February 22, 2004
    Still following this and enjoying every word. Must admit you had me shocked last chapter! Well done.
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 21, 2004
    ur mean white lilac! its all better now. geez.
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 21, 2004
    OMG!!!! YAY!!! it worked! im so happy! i really liked how u wrote that ch. it was enchanting. i hope thats not the end b/c if it is i will be sad.i want to read peoples reaction to her face and everything. ppllleeeeeaaaassssssseeeeeeeee update soon!
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on February 20, 2004
    WHAT! What what what what what!!! No, no, no, no. No. This is not happening.

    Yes, it is!
    How dare you!
    And Carmen, how dare you give the BlueSchmoo such ideas!

    Let me calm dowm a bit... and my stomach (still sensitive to that kind of images, but you warned us about torture in your fic, so I assume the responsability of my nausea).

    OK. That was definitely not the continuation I expected, and I was... surprised -which is a good thing, I guess. It would be too boring to read stories when you can anticipate the plot, the characters' reactions... So congratulations! It worked on me. And now I'm desperate to know how it goes on.
    Anyway, still angry. You, evil, evil BlueSchmoo! You let us hanging on such a cliffhanger!
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  • From ANON - Carmen on February 20, 2004
    it was good! im just excited that u used my idea, kinda. thanx for updating so soon! i will be thrilled to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 20, 2004
    EVIL CLIFFIE!!!! I sincerely hope that this is a dream sequence, cause she and snape have been through too much for this to happen. And if it isn't a dream, then how did Lucious find out? Gods this wasn't what i was expecting when i started this chapter.
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  • From ANON - WhiteLilac on February 19, 2004
    I forgot.
    It makes me very happy that you appreciate my comments. You made me realize I was being very selfish reading fics and not letting the authors know about it. It's just fair that if you make the effort to write, we readers make the effort to let you know what we think about it (even though it's just one person's opinion, and if someone says he doesn't like something -that person could be me- it doesn't mean it's bad...).
    As I just said, I can be very selfish sometimes, and so tacteless (kicks my head on the table)! I'm sorry you had to go through some problems in your life, I hope there was nothing too serious. Sorry again.
    Hugs!
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  • From ANON - WhiteLil on February 07, 1920
    Hurrah! You updated at last! After accustoming us to a dayly pace, it was hard to wait for so long.

    About Snape, you are r. Af. After admitting to Lucius he loved her (kind of, I guess accepting to die for her not to suffer can be considered a declaration of love) and saying it loud to her (two chapters later), he can be fluffy, especially if they are alone. As I read the last two chapters a long time after the rest of the story, it had all faded a little. That's why dayly updates are important! Just kidding, I know it's difficult to find time to write properly.

    That chapter was soo funny! I could imagine Sasha rabbit- and miserable-looking, and the eagle dropping... Lol! I think it's all those details that you insert so naturally, that make your story so lively.

    Very intrigued about how Severus is going to deal with Lucius, but judging by Severus' smile at the end of the chapter, we are going to enjoy it!
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