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By : Semidazed
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ccino on December 14, 2006
    WOA! Just done reading this what?.... story isn't a good enough word for this masterpiece. Yeh, I like that word, masterpiece. I was gripped from start to finish. Looking forward to the epilogue and more of Diturbances. Hope your recovering. (Don't let Weasel keep you awake all night with his none stop chatter. LOL) You've almost inspired me to try my hand at writing my own ff.
    Hurry hurry hurry.
    ccino
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - TJ on September 10, 2004
    Wonderful, fabulous fic gray lady. Interesting, original idea about the dementors being created by Fudge, and good follow up and characterization. I specially liked your spartan-speaking Severus. Thanks for finishing it **hurray** which is becoming so rare for good HP fics, and for planning an epilogue !!! . I will be waiting for it with great anticipation.

    Talking Jobberknoll

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  • From on September 08, 2004
    Great story! I loved it, and hey, sorry to hear about the surgery! I hate going under, but will be soon nonetheless, but just for eye surgery! Laser Eye Surgery! Clear vision here I come!

    C wai wait to read your other fic!
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  • From on September 08, 2004
    Great story! I loved it, and hey, sorry to hear about the surgery! I hate going under, but will be soon nonetheless, but just for eye surgery! Laser Eye Surgery! Clear vision here I come!

    Can't wait to read your other fic!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on August 21, 2004
    NO NO NO! Having finally had the time to catch up on this massive and magnificent story, I refuse to be left hanging from this awful cliff! Do something! Anything!
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on August 21, 2004
    Just a homynym quibble: Ron should use shears to cut chains, as filmy curtains (sheers) will never do the trick.
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on August 21, 2004
    Just a homynym quibble: Ron should use shears to cut chains, as filmy curtains (sheers) will never do the trick.
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on August 21, 2004
    A truly creepy chapter--I hope you don't have nightmares like that all the time...

    As to the mundane world, I hope your troubles have been resolved. I know what you are going through--I married someone like that, and had children, and it's been 11 years and the scars are still raw and the battle continues.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreg on August 21, 2004
    I can't believe that you would end the chapter like that! It was, of course, great--I can't wait until you post again.
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  • From ANON - Lady Espelle on August 11, 2004
    While I don't like reviewing if I haven't read the whole story yet, I am confused with something you wrote in chapter 10 and wanted to ask you about it before I forgot. So; sorry about my review being incomplete...

    My problem is the following: In mentioned chapter 10 you wrote: >>
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  • From ANON - Carrie on July 31, 2004
    Hi

    I'm not normally a nit piker but thought it might be helpful as a Brit to point out a couple of things? It's intended entirely constructively as I'm enjoying the story!

    1. In the UK (which is what we caurseurselves - rarely England as that is quite offensive to the other parts of the UK unless you specifically mean just England) we use feet and inches for height not meters - although the rest of Europe does indeed use metric measurements.
    2. We don't have the Euro so Harry would have pounds unless he's been on holiday.
    3. While Asda is big British supermarkets don't sell nightvision goggles or swiss army knives, it's basically just food with a few aisles of clothes and electricals.
    4. The British police are unarmed (and so are the security men) - Hermionie would not assume someone challenging her had a gun - the only time armed units are deployed is fir firearms are known to be being used by the criminals or at airports and terrorist targets.
    5. Hermionie would be the size of a houe if she ate an "English" breakfast everyday - really people only eat fry ups as a treat!
    6. Finally Hermionie's plan of running to the USA is iusabusable for a Brit - I hate to say it but a really common view of America here is that Americans turn up with too late for every fight and only when it's in their interests - sorry if that souharsharsh - it's a WWII hangover but still very real. Some one British would run the the European courts - based in The Hauge (or their magical equivalents!) as they do actually interceed on our behalf.

    Anyway great tale.

    Carrie
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on July 15, 2004
    Chapter 18~ Fallout
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  • From WriterLady1031 on July 14, 2004
    Wow, it is so nice to read an update from this story! I hope that everything is going well for you--well at least better than how they were going before. ^_^

    Keep writing! I'm enjoying the story!

    Ciao!
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