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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - Tang on July 14, 2004
    Wow, Im completely gobsmacked, that has got to be the most harshly realistic and characteristic Severus back story I have ever read!
    Just like Hermione, we can totally beliit eit ever thought we really dont want to.
    Sadly once again I have nothing constructive to say, just a lot of admiration.
    Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Jo F. on July 14, 2004
    Well, I sat up until 3:30 in the morning reading this story, and I only have this to say.

    Where the heck is the rest of it?

    I like the way this developed, the relationship between Hermione and Severus, how Ron and Harry qui quick to set aside their differences with Snape to help him. I wanted to smack the Patil twins so badly my hand itched. Nicholas was fun to meet, and I almost cried at Albus' passing.

    I hope Ron's okay. And I'm anxiously waiting to find out what happens with Harry, Hermione and Severus.

    Update soon, please?

    Jo F.
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on July 14, 2004
    Hits out on you?? Never! I'm just so happy that there's been an update. The story is thing!ing! Severus needs to be basarouaround the head with a big stick but, besides that, i'm loving the ride. I hope there'll be another update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on July 01, 2004
    Chapter 17~ Filthy Little Puppets... I am WAY behind, but am getting caught up slow, but sure!!! I am so glad that you are back & am hoping that things are going better for you!!! This chapter may not have become as AMAZING as it is if you had not worked through the other versions.... it is EXCELLENT!!! You have done a FABULOUS job with the imagery!!! I am looking forward to finding out how Ron is, what will happen to Fudge now that the Aurors have seen 'The Room'?!? Once again you have left me looking forward to MORE!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - tubin on June 30, 2004
    Great job, thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - undertheumbrella on June 24, 2004
    I had just read the whole 17 chapters in one sitting, and I must say, I wouldn`t have normally lasted that long- even if it was a good story. I`d have at least read it, say a couple chapters per day, or something of the sorts. However this story is quite exceptional, and I`m sure I`m not the only one who thinks so=) Not a lot of the romance stories I`ve read really goes into detail when it comes to fight scenes, heck, they even deliberately try to avoid it! This fanfic is definitely a refreshing change, and one with plenty of unexpected & interesting events at that! Fantastic job on the last chapter by the way :) - the periocidecident certainly added a metaphorical twang on it. I know I`m glad you chose it over the other endings. Another death would`ve made me too sad to read through^^ (as I had to take Albus` death today too). Thanks for enlightening us with your brilliant writing skills, and for your choice of Hermione and Severus as the romantic pair (for they are a most adorable couple indeed). Keep up the good work, and I am looking forward to the next chapter!

    PS I hope it won`t be too much of a bother, but would it be possible for me to be a part of the "mailing list" as to when the next chapter is due? I am a deranged fool when it comes to checking for updates =)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 20, 2004
    2nd try - After reading another story that promotted this story I decided to give it a read. So 17 chapters later, I'm still in the OMG! phase. I don't really know what to say. Not only is the story well thought out it is beautifully written. The visuals I got from that room, I thought I'd either gag or go into labour or both. The one step forward, two steps back nature of Hermione/Severus friendship/romance was pleasantly (yet angsty) believable. Dumbledore's death didn't really bother me, it made sense actually and I enjoyed the tie in with Flammel. Thanks.

    I would be grateful to be added to your e-mail notice list (and thanks for taking the time to do that, it will make following the rest of the story easier). I hope the issues in your personal life are resolving positively. Thanks again, I've really enjoyed this intense and well done story so far and look forward to reading more as you have time.
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on June 16, 2004
    So glad to see you back with an updated chapter!!! This story has been one of my faves and I can't wait to see how it ends. On the edge of my seat waiting semi-patiently for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Jana on June 16, 2004
    It was worth the wait, just don't do that again. :P
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on June 16, 2004
    Wow. That was an incredibly amazing chapter
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  • From ANON - anika on May 20, 2004
    Jeez, this is tough stuff! At first I was a little disappointed because you spent almost no time in letting the reader be tortured with Snape's anti-being-zombie state but as I read on I liked your story more and more and in the last few chapters it has really gained a lot of speed which actually left me sitting here all trembling with my eyes wide open, nibbling at my fingernails and cursing you for stopping at the point you did. And that really means something because that rarely happens to me, so you better feel flattered already!
    I also quite like the way the relationship between Snape and Hermione progresses, even if it is frustrating at times or maybe just because. I thought it was neat how you portrayed that they really care for one another even if they got difficulties showing it. How they, in light of what's to come, were trying to comfort eatherther with small signs of affection at any moment thed tod together despite the presence of the others was a nice touch.
    And since you killed Albus off, which really had to happen to make this story interesting, I'm really jsut a little bit frightened what you will do to Snape. With Hermione having those nasty images and all... No, please don't tell me! I don't want to know, I rather bathe in my anxiety as long as it lasts! Maybe it's just the time of the night but I can't rerinering having read anything that gripping for quite a while. Please, update soon, I really wanna know what the fuck is going on in that room!

    anika
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on May 01, 2004
    Yet again I must apologize for the amount of time that it took for me to read and review. As always, though, I loved the new chapter.

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 29, 2004
    Chapter 16... That is one HELL OF A CHAPTER & CHAPTER ENDING!!! What is happening to their Patronus charms?!? Is their just too much evil for them to work properly?!? What has Hermione?!?

    I really did like all of the Cloak & Dagger going on in this chapter!!! The break in to the store was GREAT & the security guard was a very nice touch!!! I also like how you went about getting them into the Ministry!!!

    I can't wait to see what will happen to them next!!! I do hope that they will be able to do what they set out to do!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - DiamondDove on April 29, 2004
    Hiya,

    Just had to leave a review....

    I stumbled upon your story yesterday and was so absorbed, I read the all the chapters that are up yesterday - taking me away from my work, you naughty, naughty girl!!! I really like your plot and I can't wait for more chapters! The SS/HG relationship also seems more natural than in other stories and less forced. I love it all! Keep writing.

    DD
    XX
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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on April 29, 2004
    I just realized I haven't reviewed in what seems like forever. I'm so sorry!tilltill love your story! I'm just buried under school work and it's not even finals yet. Gah. But anyway, I'm looking fod tod to more installments and will try to return to my inquisitive self as soon as I finish the next 12 papers and 48 tests... Until then, know that I'm reading and don't review because I feel guilty enough spending time - in which I should be working - reading fanfics. Ciao, cara. And update!
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