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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - Jiffylog on April 28, 2004
    They robbed Walmart, that is the best thing I have read in a while. I think its hysterical. Great writing. I await your next chapter with bated breath.
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  • From ANON - citrinecastle on April 28, 2004
    ARGH! How could you stop there! And please don't kill Severus! Write! Write! Write! GREAT story!
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on April 27, 2004
    Wow! Fantastic writing as always! You're evil for the cliffie, so you better update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 27, 2004
    Yah, update! I'm a lil' worried, so I think you should update soon so I don't have to worry through all my final exams. You wouldn't want that, would you?! :) Love the update, looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on April 27, 2004
    I still say they should have grabbed the laptop.

    And maybe some moist towlettes for when they're finished in the Room.

    Ewwww.

    Seriously, this was one tense chapter ~ you were unfortunately vivid in your descriptions of the Room (thanks in advance for those nightmares, btw).

    You go, girl. There She Is. You love me -- you know you do!

    ;D
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  • From ANON - Mikala on April 25, 2004
    I don't think it's possible to express in words the joy of reading this. An intricately woven plot with various twists and turns that leave me hanging on the edge of my seat. I've reread it several times and come away with something different each time. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - carpetfibers on April 25, 2004
    Grey-
    Mad great story you have going here- completely engaging. Sorry for not having reviewed before; I just suck as a person. *shrugs* I was born a bastard; it's in the blood, you know? Right, well now that I have that bit of irony out and laughing, on with the raving:
    1) Hermione feels completely on character; Snape, though, at times, the amount of physicnternteraction he has (ie: the early on comforting and such) with Hermione seems slightly off. Although, now, at this point and time, it's all ral-ral-like. So, yeah, ignore me.
    2) I'm glad you killed Albus. Well, not *glad*, but a writer I appreciate the maturity of the decision. (Oh gods, I sound so madly pompous. Grrr...)
    3) The whole dementor thing: fantastic idea! Bully for you, Grey! I've been reading all sorts of mad cap hp fics out there and this has been the first to take such a direct spin on the damned things. And you do it so brilliantly at that. Go you!
    Right, well, that's it with my raving. If you'd add me to your update list, I'd be madly grateful. Chuce and such.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2004
    This is an absolutely fabulous story! The angst is nicely portioned, enough for the story to have the correct feel but not so much as to prompt me to curl up in the fetal position in a corner sobbing. The whole epoolpool of blood thing giving birth to dementors is a very interesting idea. I also really like your character interaction, especially the Hermione Severus bits. Looking forward to more :)
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 15, 2004
    Wow! What a chapter... it was worth the wait. RL comes first, but I'm very selfishly glad you found time to post this chapter. This is a wonderful escalation of the antagonists apparently overwing ing power which our few noble heroes must face. The foreshadowing of a dead Snape is a bit heart wrenching but maybe a very serious lesson for Hermione and Snape to learn. I look forward to your act 3...
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  • From WriterLady1031 on April 15, 2004
    Hey hon! Absolutely fabulous chapter! That whole part with the Dementors was really interesting and it got me to thinking that what you'vitteitten might just be the case for them. CREEPY! *scary music playing* Of course, I will be back for more.

    Now, about my story. I've actually added two chapters since then, chapters 17 and 18, and I took into consideration about what you were talking about in your fabulous reviews. I'm working on chapter 19 right now, so that should be up late tomorrow evening (Pacific Standard Time), with chapter 20 being posted on Monday at the latest. The story is getting good, if I do say so myself!

    Oh and about that sh"fr"friend", I hate people like that. What happened to being honest?! Geez, some freak is always out for a buck. But don't worry, karma is a boomerang...no matter where you go it always comes back.


    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 14, 2004
    Chapter 15... Still playing catch up here!!! As with this entire story so far I am very much taken by how you are writing the way these characters interact with each other!!! I really like how you used Binns in your story!!! I also like the fact that you have kept Fudge as a character that I LOVE to HATE & I can only hope that he will get more than his just desserts when all is said & done!!!

    What you have written about the book so far is very interesting & look forward to learning more!!! It makes perfect & frightening sense as to how the Dementors are created!!! Who in their right mind would want to do such a thing?!? Wait, Fudge, right mind, 2 things that do not belong in the same thought or sentence!!! I am VERY curious to find out his motives!!!

    I am looking forward to chapter 16, Deb >^..^
    ^..^
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 13, 2004
    Great chapter. It seems like the shit is going to hit the fan like now. What the hell is Fudge thinking? Or rather is he thinking at all? I loved the part in which Severus basically took control of the situation. I like how he has unknowingly become a sort of leader for them, he certainly is still an authority figure. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
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  • From ANON - ArienAstera on April 13, 2004
    I'm sorry for your troubles but I think that this chapter was well worth the wait. It explained a lot and helped me to understand better about things.
    ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 13, 2004
    Great chapter. Inspite of everything you have been going through(and it sounds like A LOT!!), you managed to write another awesome cliffhanger. I am sure that most of your loyal readers will be able to wait for an update while you get things right in your life. Thank you so much for a wonderful read and I am hoping that whatever is going on in your life will be resolved soon.
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  • From ANON - Hawklaw on April 13, 2004
    It was truly a wonderful chapter -- well written, and the plot is developing in an engrossing way. Your powers of description are incredible. Sorry about your RL -- sending good thoughts and vibes your way!
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