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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on April 04, 2004
    I loved this chapter...Can't wait until you post again
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  • From ANON - Melissa on March 30, 2004
    I've dabbled in fanfic, in various fandoms, since before I even knew what fanfic was...but I've never had the courage to share any. However, I've resolved to give feedback to the people who do have the courage.

    I'm enjoying this tale immensely. It's every bit as gripping as any of the published work I'm reading, and the only disadvantage I see is that I can't read your work in the bath...well, and that it's not complete.

    Thank you for the journey you're taking me on; I'm quite enjoying the ride.

    More specifically, I'm really enjoying your take on Severus. You've keim sim snarky, but soft as well. Beautiful.

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  • From ANON - Gabriele on March 30, 2004
    Thats an incredible interesting story. Very exciting, very realistic, but as desperate the situation for all four of them may be in the moment, there is l hol hope.
    And I love: "Severus would never apologize or excuse his actions" - thats our Severus!

    Only one thing: do you real believe the Americans would help them?
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  • From ANON - Tamara on March 28, 2004
    Another nicely done chapter. I really do like the play between Severus and Hermione as you've done a wonderful job. I can feel the dance behind the words and I like the delicate balance between the two that you've set up...so when are you going to shatter it and make them figure things out.

    All right, I know that I'm impatient, I'm sorry. Not.

    Keep going and thank you for writing it,
    T
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 28, 2004
    Chapter 14... What a chapter & what a plan!!! I think it's brilliant & scary, but it may be the only thing that they can do!!! I feel so badly for Hemione, she has so much going through her mind, wanting to clear their names while keeping all of them safe in the process!!!

    I am so glaat Sat Severus came to her!!! I just wish that they would both be done with it & express their real feelings!!!

    Can't wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 28, 2004
    Loved the update, it makes me happy. So they're all going...are you planning on killing off some more characters, or do we get to keep our favorite Gryffindors and Potions Master? *grin*
    No one took a hit out on you, but remember, if we don't get updates, we get grumpy. I may just have to send a bunny assassin after you if there isn't an update soon...(please don't ask). Looking forward to another update, don't worry, no assassin bunnies unless you take forever (forever = more than a few weeks).

    Have a great day, week, year, life. Take your pick. Ciao.




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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 28, 2004
    Wow, this gets better and better. I'm glad Hermione and Severus have made peace. I think he came as close as he could right now to letting her know how much he cares for her and I'm glad she realized that was what he was doing. I'm a little worried about that room, but if they can get the evidence they need hopefully they can bring Fudge down. God I hate him. I don't know if I hate him more in fanfic or in the actual books, but that man needs to be driven down a peg or two.
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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on March 28, 2004
    I'm sure you updated promptly, and thus I will put away the sledge hammer. I didn't say anything about the dagger, though. I haven't actually read the updates until now - damn vacation to Florida in a place with only one crappy "internet kiosk" that costs a quarter a minute. But anyway. I don't hate you. I'm glad it wasn't perfect and rosy. Dumbledore spoke of a woman before he died? Gods, people are so predictable, even if they're incredibly powerful and blah blah blah everyone still needs to be loved and all that jazz. Excuse me, I'm a bit bitter. I really like that Hermione refused to be just a distraction, and I can't wait to see what's in that book Dumbledore suggested...
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 23, 2004
    Okay, I'm back after a little mishap with my key board. ^_^ I'll just continue. *looking silly* That's never happened before! *a dunce cap slams onto her head*
    LOL!

    Anyway, I really like that this chapter was put into the story. I think that eedeeeded to be there, you know? So don't feel bad for putting it in there or rather the chapter for putting itself in there because it helps develop the personal relationships in the story even further.

    I'll be back for more, hon!
    iao!iao!

    Psst... go read my story! ^_^

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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 23, 2004
    AWW DAMN IT! HE DIED!

    Really, that's exactly what I thought. Another dead on description of emo emotions in this one because I reacted the same way that Severus did--no crying or screaming, just a solemn look on my face. Hey, you didn't lose any cool points with me--I think what you did was great. I really do think that in this case Albus had to die. His death needs to be a doorway for another escape for them--an opening for what they really need. Y
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 23, 2004
    Honey, I am back! ^_^ How are you doin? I'm doing great.

    Now, on to the latest update. I loved how you set up the dialogue for this chapter. The parts with Albus really reminded me of how my grandma was before she died--her whole conversation would be like that, totally drifting in and out of the present and the past. It's highly disturbing and sometimes I reacted the way that Harry did, but not to the extent of the bleeding nails. There's that word again: disturbing! But well... that's the only real way to describe the feelings you get when we find ourselves in situations like that.

    Now, I'm off to read the next chapter'll 'll have comments for that one as well. ^_^

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - meg on March 23, 2004
    First, I have to admit that, even though I really should, I never actually take the time to review stories. This is a first for me, and that should tell you just how much I'm enjoying your work - this is, by far, my favorite fic here. I can't wait to see where this story takes me!
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  • From ANON - Andrea on March 22, 2004
    This is a wonderfully written story!

    I agree that for the most part, the 'Dumbledore lives happily ever after' endings are very boring, and I will continue to read this story.
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on March 22, 2004
    Still one of my favorite stories! I don't care ofteoften you update--it can never be fast enough. Albus dying was a very sad moment and I errierribly frustrated with Severus and Hermione I c I can't wait to see where it goes. Very curious to see an explanation of "the room". Keep it up! By the way, Lenore and the birds reference--The Raven by Poe?
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  • From ANON - Tamara on March 22, 2004
    **Hee hee, you're right, it wasn't hard -- Poe's "The Raven." I love it. Thank you eve muc much for writing it and I can't wait until the next chapter comes. You're doing a splendid job, please keept it up. Thanks, T
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