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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - OrinLeland on March 22, 2004
    Was that an intentional reference to Edgar Allen Poe with Lenore and the birds? Or am I connecting the unconnectable again?

    You are certainly not on my flame list for killing Albus... truthfully I can see it coming in the books. And I certainly aaplaud you for giving Hermione the brains for not letting Severus try to drown his grief in sex. As much as we all want to see them together, a desctructive relationship is not a good one for them.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on March 22, 2004
    I figured that Albus would be dying shortly but I didn
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  • From ANON - damademuerta on March 21, 2004
    Blah! No one is going to stop reading your story, you silly rabbit! It is a deliteful tale, and I look forward to reading more. Although your Snape does not seem like he would shag to forget. Maybe he was attemping to express feelings and is afraid that this might be the last chance for it. And now believes his his feelings are not returned, hence the slumped shoulders? I'm sure all will become clear with time.
    Dama

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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 21, 2004
    Very good chapter! Very sad, but very well written. Keep up the good work! I'm definitely going to continue following it, so update soon!
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 21, 2004
    "La da dee, dee da! Oh look, Albus will be okay! Now everything will be fine! Let
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 21, 2004
    I will start this by saying that I will be reading your story to the end!!! This is a very good story, well written & deserves to be read!!! It is your story & I respect whatever path you choose to take it on!!!

    Chapter 13... I am very sad that Albus has died!!! I do understand the reasoning you gave behind your choice!!! Keeping Albus alive would have made for a very easy story to write so without easyeasy, I am looking forward to seeing the way you work this all out!!!

    I am quite inteested in seeing what is in the book that Albus told Hermione to read!!! What does it contain & will it help them help Severus?!?

    As for Severus, I do hope that he will realize that Hermione did the right thing by not sleeping with him!!! He is a smart man that is in a lot of pain & I think he will see she was right!!!

    Looking forward to chapter 14, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - kimmy on March 21, 2004
    You're not going to lose a reader here, with me. I love angst; it shows that you have the bravery to treat characters with a sense of true life. The emotions you invoke with writing this are so much more important to me than what it would be if everyone lived "happily ever after." I am truly enjoying this story of yours... tears, heartache, and all. Thank you so much for providing us with this entertainment. :)
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  • From ANON - Rumours on March 21, 2004
    Don't worry about people dropping off because you made a certain plot decision. It's all up to you, and if we buy into the world you're creating (and by that, I am talking about the direction the characters are going, and consequently, their world/s), then we have to accept what the characters are also struggling to accept.

    I love your story. It's one of my favourites that I always check up on. :)

    *smiles*

    Thank you for a great work! :)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 21, 2004
    Well I'm shocked. I was hoping they would have been able to help Dumbledore but now things are going to be even more difficult for Severus. How the here tre they going to prove his innocence now? Great chapter and very sad. I don't blame Hermione for not giving herself to Severus. I mean not that she did not want to but I understand the reasoning of it. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me.
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  • From Flyingegg on March 21, 2004
    Lady, you did absolutely right. I have never respected Albus Dumbledore more than in his death, here. It was beautifully written. If I'd expected sunshine and kittens from this story I would have stopped reading when you described the bloody room of souls. Your interpretation of JKR's world seems sincere, and the way you're crafting this story, the dimensions you are showing of thveryvery human people, is amazing and wonderful. I have no doubt that Dumbledore's death will propel this story into the next few turns of the plot. I look forward to more from you.
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  • From ANON - OrinLeland on March 15, 2004
    I forgot to actually review!

    That whole chest thing... certainly disturbing, it actually reminds me of "Guts" by Chuck Palahniuk... he's the guy who wrote 'Fight Club'... http://www.freewebs.com/reverendbeastly/guts.htm Don't read this if you are at all squeamish... it made my stomach churn and I've done disections with no problem.

    You will find that alot of things remind me of something else. But then, I guess that's a good thing.

    Keep up the good work.. you know, how is it that the curse killed Hermoine's parents is taking so long on Albus? Because he's a wisard or they found something to slow it? Just an idea, like to hear more about it..
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  • From ANON - OrinLeland on March 15, 2004
    Certainlyhad had the idea to post it up here while I was writing to you, at least until I can find a webhost for my site that I am planning. It's hard to find a place that will allow me to post some of the stuff I write. I don't want to pay for something only to have them take it down and say I broke their rules and not give me my money back.

    http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=21809

    Therelotslots more, but I still have to edit it.. ie. copy all the posts from the yahoo group, fix spelling errors and reformat it to post up one here. That's alot of work actually, and each chapter is equivalent to a day so I have to watch for the breaks.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 15, 2004
    Fantastic! Albus's condition almost made me cry. How heartwrenching to see a man of such power slowly deteriorating like that. Absolutely fantastic story, and I am enjoying every minute. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 14, 2004
    Chapter 12..... POOR Albus!!! I do hope that Severus & Nicholas will be able to build another Philosopher
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  • From ANON - ran on March 14, 2004
    Fantastic! Thank you :-)
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