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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on March 14, 2004
    Well
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 14, 2004
    Great chapter. I'm so glad we finally know what happaned to Dumbledore. I knew he had to have had something big happen for him not to have defended Severus after war.war. I hope they can figure out how to make the new stone before its too late.

    You did a great job with Dumbledores ramblings. It was very true to life, people in that state of mind sometimes have a difficult time separating the past from the present and often get them mixed together into one.

    Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Orin Leland on March 13, 2004
    Well, it's always great to come back from a "Computer-free" break and have somethiood ood to read ^_^

    Anyways, now that I actuahavehave some time to go into this.. I'm in a Role Playing Story at the moment.. basicly, one person has characters they write as, the other has theirs, so on, I'm sure you get the picture. Well, one of the characters I have at one point became tangled up in the affairs of another character. they spent so long dodging around what was there with a relationship, but they finally figured things out, though there was still some fustrations here and there. Nothing is ever the lovey-dovey-the-rest-of-the-world-has-stopped-because-we-are-in-love situation, it's sort of reallt twisted and tagled web of resopnsibilities and such... I am planning on putting the archives of it up somewhere... I might put em here... It creates a very long story... it all began August 29th of 2003... lord only knows if it will ever end...


    Look at me rambling! Sorry about that, anyways, I was just noting how situations were a bit similar with characters. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 12, 2004
    Woohoo! I'm back again with another review! Wow... the last two chapters were crazy! The whole thing with the celestial sphere was really cool--I wish I c I could have seen something like that with my own eyes. I also laughed when Ron and Serverus had no idea what the internet was--I love it when people get that funny confused look on their faces; it's just hysterical to me.

    Anywho, chapter 11 was just as crazy. I was nervous for a little bit when Hermoine fell into the water like that. And how she was miles out in the water had me nervous that some kind and loving shark was going to come along. That was a really interesting way to describe the anti-apparation effect. I had sort of wondered just how bad it would be if somebody ran against it and there it was! Really good detail with that, you know.

    Psst...would you mind reading my story. I need some more opinions on it. It's called "The Way Back Home" and you can find it under my fabulous profile. ^_^

    I'll be back for more!

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Dame Niamh on March 12, 2004
    (beating self around head and shoulders with braid) I should go and iron my hands for not finding this beautiful story before! This is a fresh approach, which is always welcome, to the post-war time, and a gripping mystery. More, please! More! More!
    Blessed be
    Dame Niamh
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on March 11, 2004
    I like coffee, I like tea, I don't get periods since my hysterectomy!


    I love the boys' discomfort -- WUSSIES!!! I'd imagine as Head of House, Severus has had to deal with his share of hormones, cramps, and feminine supply crises; his reaction was exactly what I'd expect.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 11, 2004
    Chapter 11... WOW, this is really something!!! I don't recall ever reading a story in which anyone hit an apparition barrier, VERY INTERESTING!!! I am always happy to find something new (new to me anyway) or unusual in a story!!!

    I feel badly that they all ended up banged up, but at least they all were able to get back to the point where they had started!!!

    Now that they have found Nicholas Flamel alive I am hoping that he will lead them to Albus (an alive Albus)!!! I want so much for everything to get taken care of so that Hermione & Severus & take their relationship to the next level!!! I can't wait to see what they find out from Nicholas Flamel!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 11, 2004
    Ouch! Embolisms aren't fun, I gather...So they are one step closer to Albus, and hopefully further away from Azkaban. I gather there is only so long the Aurorers can stall...

    I would like to be added to the update notatioation list...I often miss updates on this site. (And you'll get to have a nifty address-name on your list ^_^ )
    I can't wait to see another chapter! (Well, I can, but it will be done so grudgingly. :P)

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on March 11, 2004
    I love your description of everything

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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on March 11, 2004
    AHHH! EVIL! EVIL! NAKED! NAKED! (it's a long story invovling a kid with TS... don't ask) I can't belive you and your evil evil evil evil (naked) cliffie! I'm going to go insane. Yes, you updated quickly... but what's the point if you're going ot leave us with that? GAH! ::takes out sledgehammer:: You see this thing? I'm not afraid to use itgivegives experimental swing... hits wall, hard:: SEE! NOW GET BACK HERE AND FINISH. Thank you, come again.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 11, 2004
    Thank goodness thay at least found Flamel. Okay so now things are picking up. Fingers and toes crossed! Where's Dumbledore?
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  • From ANON - AJS on March 11, 2004
    This is fabulous. My spirits rise when I see you have updated. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Tiny Dreamer on March 11, 2004
    Hey, I just read youre story and I really like it so far. Though it started really creepy and was a very little bit too much travelling around in the middle it is very well written. But I guess that will change now and all was the silence before the storm. I really await the reason, why Dumbledore felt to hide that much.
    Keep going, you just found a new reader!
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on March 10, 2004
    I LIKE ANGSTY! I read 80% angst and 20% fluffy lemons. Fluff is there for the purpose of lightening up things so you aren't too stressed to read the angst. One of mltimltime favorite movies is American Werewolf In London. It was the first movie that I watched where it had you rolling on the floor laughing then in a heatbeat would scare the shit out of you. It is an extremely effective technique. It is harder to do that so suddenly in the written word but it is really wonderfull when you find a peice that can. Poe could do that although even his humor was dark and subltle.

    This story is comming along nicely. If anyone is abandoning you it is because you didn't give them immediate lemon gratification. Tough. A good story is worth much more than cheap lemons.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on March 10, 2004
    I am very sorry for taking so long to review. I have been busy and, sadly, was unable to fit in time to review.
    For chapter 9, I enjoyed it and thought that it well written.
    As for chapter 10, I enjoyed it and the oprobproblems that I could come up with were grammar errors.
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