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By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 10, 2004
    Yet another great chapter! I'm really enjoying the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on March 10, 2004
    Ooooh pretty hair. Sorry, just love the idea of mahogany-ish hair, considering I've always wanted that color myself, except I'd feel too vain dying my hair. I dunno, I'm weird... don't even wear makeup. But you don't need to know that. I love the chapter, and can't wait for more. Put me on the update list, if you can.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 10, 2004
    I do so wish that I could remember what list(s) I had seen your story mentioned on so that I could go back & thank them for pointing me in its direction!!! I do want to thank you though for sharing this story, I am very much enjoying it!!!

    Chapter 10... I am so happy to see that Hermione & Severus are becoming closer (well as close as they are comfortable with for now)!!! They are so very good for each other!!!

    I am also happy to see that Harry & Ron are now helping them more, not to mention the Order, Minerva & Remus!!! Hermione & Severus are so very lucky to have people that care & want to see this wrong righted!!! Nice touch that Harry & Ron didn't push the issue of Hermione & Severus being 'together'!!! I also like Hermione's convictions to Severus!!! I have to agree with her: "I
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  • From k8gsmith on March 10, 2004
    You don't suyou you wouldn't suck, you couldn't suck if you tried (insert tacky double entendre here: ) and I don't do anng mng more than move a comma or two. Oh, and I leave lots of fangirl comments in your stuff that make you have to pick through your chapters deleting them before you post.

    Now stop that infernal whining and go write more!

    That moment between Snape and Hermione when she tells him she does truly think that much of him was lovely ~ and 10 points to you for gi us us the word of the day!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 10, 2004
    Great chapter. I'm glad to see Harry and Ron have joined in to help. I'm a li con confused. Is Dumbledore hiding or was he kidnapped? If the war is over why would he not have stayed behind, why would he not have defended Severus? I'm thinking you'll explain this at some point I'm just curious.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on March 04, 2004
    This is a truly intriguing piece. Severus and Hermione's relationship is truly complicated in this story...it's wonderful to read. And the note from Harry...has the Ministry figured out what's going on?! I shall now commence in my shameless begging for an update. Please please please please.

    Have a good day. Ciao.
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  • From ANON - em on March 04, 2004
    OMG....you can't leave it their!! what did harrys letter mean? update asap!
    please email me at lollylips3@hotmail.com when u update this exellent story!!!

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  • From GoldenFeather on March 04, 2004
    I hadn't gotten to this story right away, but I am really enjoying it noat Iat I have. Of course Albus would only use a pattern that would be so obvious yet impossible to notice, though I wonder how that transposes onto a flat map. Looking forward to the next chapter while grumbling about cliffies!
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 03, 2004
    Chapters 1-9... I wasn't going to start another new story, but your's has gotten some very good reviews as well as noted on a couple of the lists I'm on... in other words, I had to find out for myself!!! That is why I have spent most of the day (between everything my family requires of me) to read everything you have written of this story so far!!!

    I am very impressed with what I have read!!! You have a very good imagination, a wonderful sense of humor & a talent for writing romance for frustrated charas!!!s!!! The scene in the room that held his soul was well written & easy to picture with the mind's eye!!! I am also glad to see that they FINALLY got in a good kiss & have come to some form of agreement that there is something there that is worth the bother!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing what they will find in Oaxaca, Mexico as well as hoping that they will take a few minutes (or hours) to REALLY find out just how worth the bother they are to each other!!! I hope that they find Albus soon so that things will be cleared up & they won't have to worry about him being caught non-zombified (not even sure if that's a real word)!!!

    I would also like to be added to your list of people to receive notes of updates*
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  • From ANON - OrinLeland on March 03, 2004
    I'm really loving this fic! ^_^ Especially the way they dance around the subject of a relationship, trying to ignore it. Seems very realistic, it's in human nature it seems. In a way Snape and Hermoine remind me of a characters in an RPS I'm in...
    It's coming along really nice though, keep it up! I'll be checking back for updates ^_^
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  • From Flyingegg on March 03, 2004
    Your writing sucked me in. Your characterization kept me hooked. Your delicious prose keeps me panting for more. My heart races when I see you've updated this fic, and I feel like a giddy schoolgirl again. Thanks for all your hard work. I love it.
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 03, 2004
    Hon, I you're slacking! LOL, naw just kidding. You're doing really good with this story. This chapter was just as good. I liked the idea of using the constellations as a map--it is very possible for something like that to occur. I also liked how you set up the strained relationship between Hone one and Severus because it shows that they're not just going to fall into it--they're going to fight it all the way because of their personalities; the way I think that they should. Besides, it makes for a great story!

    Now, about my use of the word "disturbing": that was the only word that I could think of to describe what she saw in there. I sure as hell would have called it the same because you just don't forget something as scary as that. Hence, my word usage. ^_^ You said that this story wasn't an NC-17? I thought it was! Oh, well shows what I know...geez, we're supposed to learn something when we go to college! ^_^

    Keep up the good work--I will definitely be back for more!

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on March 02, 2004
    The whole constellation thing was inspirational. And it does sound like something Albuuld uld do, he's flaky like that, genius, but flaky, which is exactly him. I was so happy to see an update. Is Snape finally deciding he is gonna do something about his attraction? Thank Merlin, he waited long enough. I know the muses work like this, but I'm rather impatient. Sorry.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on March 02, 2004
    another wonderful chapters and I love this story.................... You are doing a excelent jobthisthis............. but can't hel won wonnder what is going to happen on July 5th and for them not to go home............. I will see in the next chapter I hope and as always keep up with the excelent work.
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on March 02, 2004
    Have I told you lately that I love you? Oh yeah, just last night....{she moaned -- get it???}

    I SO love your sense of humor and I SO love your writing. This chapter was great. You built thustrustration over not being able to find Albus perfectly and then gave us the "Ah ha!" constellation moment. Brilliant, I tell you, just brilliant and I didn't see it coming AT ALL. I love when that happens.

    The frustration in the relationship between Hermione and Snape is going beautifully as well, with both of them questioning exactly why they're (their, there) feeling the way they do and whether or not they should act on it (they should, they should!).

    I can't wait for chapter 10 from you. Of course, I can't wait for chapter 13 from me either but that's a different story...

    GO YOU! and as you would say, MMMMMWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAA! :*
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