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Reviews for Mephistopheles

By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - Beatrice on March 02, 2004
    I love this fic. This restrained kind of relationship fits Hremione and Snapes personalities really well. About the length thing though - when I went to England I was told that I was five foot nine and not 176 cm, which is what we say in Sweden. So allthough most Europeans, I think, use the meter system Britain is still lagging behind. Growing up as a witch Hermione would propably be even less inclined to use the meter system - considering that the wizaeding world still uses galleons et.c..
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  • From ANON - XxphenixX on March 02, 2004
    Yay! Getting to the good fun relationship parts! I love the angst and drama and whatnot, mind you, but it just makes me happy when stuff works out, you know? I don't know if it's just me but Harry's message confused me... what exactly did he mean? And I have read "Teacher, Teacher" - Gods that woman has a way with food. ::stomach grumbles:: Right, shall ignore that for the moment. Anyway... I'm glad you figured out what you're doing. Feel free to let the rest of us know by UPDATING.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on February 28, 2004
    This story is amazing. The whole thing with the room was highly disturbing and I was in the frame of mind to run like Hermoine did. That makes this story especially good because I was feeling what she was feeling. Hopefullyey fey find Albus soon. Also, I totally understand the situation with the Patil twins--it made me a little angry--but I think that it needed to be there.

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - mother on February 23, 2004
    This is brilliant, its always good to read something that is a little different. There is something about that seal thought that bugs me but I can't put my finger on it.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 23, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer, I hope we are going somewhere with all this angst, both Hermione and Snape are characters, I believe, that will go after what they want as soon as they decide they want it. I know they are still deciding and weighing risks, but I hope it gets more complicated soon. I don't need an email cause I'm on this site daily, hehehe.Post as soon as you can!

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on February 23, 2004
    the kiss that sent her bearly over the edge and he backs away from it.......... sounds like most men anyway lol......... well anyway I love the penquien joke that was funny and I loved....................Smiley face was excellent too .......as always keep with the great work
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  • From ANON - XxphenixX on February 22, 2004
    Fantastic, m'dear. Humor (loved the seal bit!), romance (although somewhat unwanted), random facts about penguins... what else could you ask for in a fanfiction? More smiley faces? Hermione giving Snape ballet lessons? And as for that old (coughcoughinsanecoughcough) Dumbledore, the connection is probably candy-related. Those things are laced with drugs of some sort... don't have the lemon drops!
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on February 22, 2004
    Of co I w I would like to be added to the update list. I've been checking every so often to see if you've updated and have wanted to scream bloody murder that you haven't (patience isn't one of my finer points). When I saw that you had updated I had to do a double date (I was so happy that I felt like a little child being offered their wildest wish).
    I love how you added humor throughout this chapter. "She was tempted to tell him that his face could freeze that way." really stood out to me--so did "Hermione was inches from suggesting they crawl on all fours." When I was reading I was continually laughing and received some unfriendly looks.....
    I love how you added the part about penguins and the leopard seal. I love penguins and the mental picture of Snape and Hermione being charged at by a leopard seal was great... (laughed very hard through that scene--well through most of the chapter).
    I'm highly impressed at how in character you've made Snape. I think that it's all fine and dandy if someone wants to write a story using Harry Potter characters it'it's slightly weird when they made them too much out of character (they could have always posted their story under original....).
    Once again I am highly looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on February 15, 2004
    when i was reading i was thinking to myself that they should go to antarctica just because it'd be cool--so, great choice :D when they go there, though, do they meet something filled with drama? you need something to keep people unsure as to what's going to happext..xt...
    when do we get to find out why snape acted the way he did towards the twins?
    do we get to see more of harry and ron or any other main characters? like i said, something to spiece things up....
    but as usual i love it....keep up the great work...
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  • From tristar3149 on February 13, 2004
    the argument between them selves was excelnt and very well done.................................. And the fact that Hermione could get that angery at a person and through something was excent Idea.................................And i can't wait to see what antartica is going to bring.................... as always keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on February 13, 2004
    I am enjoying the development of this story. The room where he was imprisoned was genius. I found that the cannon account of the brains sinister but that sort of slipped to the background. I mean whose brains are they? Your story has got me thinking more about them now.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on February 12, 2004
    *crying very hard* i can't believe that you would end the chapter like that! how rude (although on a fair level i have to say that it was a great cliff hanger...)!!
    i loved hermione's nightmare...i know how hard it can be to write dreams and yours came across smooth and as a real dream would. i am honestly looking forward to what happens next....
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on February 11, 2004
    That's freaky. Some script error on my review. What that was supposed to say is that this is going to be a fic for ages! It's wonderfully well wrn, an, and I love it!
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on February 11, 2004
    Girl, you have a serious talent here. This is defiintely one of the most well-written and engaging stories I've read. It just keeps getting better and better. I love it, love it, love it! Keep up the good work! It looks like this i
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 11, 2004
    I want to throttle the Parvati twins. I know Snape is more controlled, but man I wanted to hurt em. I know it was part of the challenge, but poor Sev, Aww.

    elementaldeity
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