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Reviews for Mephistopheles

By : Semidazed
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 11, 2004
    I'm so glad to wake up and see two new chapters. The breakfast scene between Hermione and Snape was great, very casual and comfortable. I however felt really sorry for Snape when those two bitches Padma and Parvati came into Hermiones home and started insulting him. I'm suriprised Hermione didn't throw them out before but I guess then it would not have made for good writing. Great story I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydream on February 07, 2004
    even though i know that you were kidding you're right, i do like your writing style... it does not come across as simple and stupid nor does it come across as overdone and flowery. i love to read and often when i'm on the computer i end up reading a hermione/snape fiction. its amazing how many stories look like someone pulled them out of their ass. i'm sure that most people right here would be going, 'what do you know about writing?' and i would agree with them-that i couldn't talk unless i write, which i do. it always bothers me when an author writes a story that has no personal touch to it and looks as if i could belong to five other people....another thing i love about your plot... i've been continually thinking oe roe room in which hermione saved snape's soul.....very inspiring...so far i haven't been disappointed...i can't wait to see what happens next-even if its driving me crazy that i have to wait for you to post the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Gabriele on February 09, 2004
    Oh, I see light at the horizont! Holding her in his lap is a good idea for the beginnig ......
    I had an idea that this horror room is not only disgusting and frightening but also dangerous.
    Its an interesting story you wriere ere and I look foreward to updates!
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on February 08, 2004
    wow this is a great story and I can't wait to see what happens next....as always keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - influenza1918 on February 08, 2004
    She awoke with a jerk many hours later.

    That's happened to me many times. However, I don't think Snape would appreciate being called a jerk.

    Dude, I crack myself up.

    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 08, 2004
    To find out a girl died in that room, yuck. I was pleasantly surprized to see Snape so comforting to Hermione. At first I thought it would have been Harry. But was thrilled to find out Snape does care. Aww.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - otherside on February 07, 2004
    This is a great fic, i love the lead in with zombie!snape (does hermione have a top 10 list of fun things to do with zombie snape? sorry, spoiling the angst here) i really loved your description of toom oom in the department of myeteries. it really put me in that awful place, and i'm really interested in where this story is going :)
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 07, 2004
    Great story so far--and I can just see the Ministry doing what it did, too. Pity Snape didn't have access to his blackmail files in time, but I digress. Good movment in this chapter, looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Tubin on February 07, 2004
    I think utopic is fine; it doesn't really need explanation. I do appreciate the careful attention to grammer, spelling, and syntax, and I think your description of the scene in the department of mysteries was chillingly well-done!

    I hope that you will continue to update this story.
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  • From ANON - Gabriele on February 07, 2004
    Phuuuu - interesting story! This is truely not a society I would like to live in: first the Dementor
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on February 07, 2004
    This is a very interresting aproach to the couple.
    Have you ever visit WIKTT? It would be nice if you anounce your up dates there.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on February 06, 2004
    I'm enjoying this so much! Very intriguing. Please keep up the good work! I love the interaction between Hermione and Snape, too - especially all the "biting" comments. :)
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  • From ANON - influenza1918 on February 06, 2004
    This is looking to be an excellent story. It's well-written and intriguing. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 06, 2004
    Another great chapter. I never thought about the werewolves, I would have been fresh meat, oops. Anyway, I love the line where Hermione says her Harry and Ron running from danger or towards it depending on the year. That was greatic ric relief from the seriousness of the situation. As well as her wanting to give Snape something pointy. Gotta love a girl who has that wry dry sense of humor. Post soon.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on February 06, 2004
    to be very honest with you i have to begin that i am not a fan of hg/ss fics where hg is finished with her schooling at hogwarts, nor am i a fan of fics where they must go on a quest to find or solve something. shortly after your second chap. was posted i was searching for a new, good fic to read about hg/ss when i found yours. i was highly impressed with your style and the plot of the story. i have been checking every few days to see if you had posted a new chap. i hope that you stick with this fic (i can't stand it when someone writes a great story only to never finish it half way through). i can't wait to find out what happends with hg and ss along their way... and even though this doesn't have that happy tone it should hooked me. i can't wait until chap 5 is posted because i'm dying to know what happens next... thanks for sharing such a wonderful story... sorry that this review probably isn't very great and things of that nature but it is late (but i still wanted you to know how muchnjoynjoy reading your fic...)
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