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By : Hel
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 28, 2004
    chapter 4... Another AMAZING chapter!!! Yes I think your soft spot for Draco shows & I really think it adds to the story!!!

    I like how Hermione talks to Severus as if he were complete!!! I am wondering if he will be able to remember this when he is whole again?!? Speaking of which..... what a way to end this chapter!!! I am so glad Har Harry has good news!!! I can't wait to find out what they are going to have to go through to get it back & then restore Severus to the man he should be!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - mother on March 28, 2004
    Brilliant. I confess to being curious about Ron's behaviour and not a little suspicious.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 03, 2004
    This is a superbly grim and gripping tale you're weaving. Each protagonist as wounded as the other. Hermione and Snape being equally self-sacrificing gives them some very interesting common ground (in a bit of gallows humor, I can see them comparing scars with Hermione's eye-popping stunt being a topper). Draco makes for a convincing rebel to his cause -- it's easy to see that nothing short of the sell out would really turn him from his predestined path. But once turned, he becomes a formiddable and staunch ally. You've structured this story beautifully. It has several things in common with the other challenge responses (naturally) however, the anger and grim determination inherent in the protagonists in this particular story are compelling. You can see that with Hermione's newly/painfully acquired arcane knowledge, she really is the only person who would be able to save Snape. Overall, this is a very nicely constructed dynamic.
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  • From ANON - Susan on March 03, 2004
    Ok, can wait for healthy Snape. Pleaaaaaaaaaassse say that bitch Pansy is dead or worse! Sorry, not usually so malicious, but she cut out Hermione's eye!!!!!! Love the drunken truth telling. Thanks for a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 02, 2004
    Chapter 3... 'Gone in 60 Seconds', I LOVE that movie & now that you say it, I can see how the War Room came from that, GREAT IDEA!!!

    This is ONE HELL of a GREAT chapter!!! The conversation between Hermione & Draco is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! My heart hurts for both of them!!! The things that happened to Hermione (Please tell me that P.O.S. Pansy is DEAD!!!) & what Lucius was willing to allow to happen to Draco, so very sad, yet they both grew from it all!!! I really do like how these 2 are getting along here, kindred spirits that have so much in common!!! Sad that they have even more in common than 2 young people should, at least on the bad side of things!!!

    I am looking forward to learning more about these people & seeing them working together!!! I am still hoping that Albus will be found soon & that Severus will be able to be given his life back!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on March 02, 2004
    wow a very interesting chapter and I loved it and it explains a lot of what happened there........................ well anyway keep up with the excelent work
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  • From ANON - mother on February 17, 2004
    Mmmmm, very good, very readable. Can I ask a question? What, exactly, have the Ministry done to him? Yes, I know that's two questions.
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  • From ANON - Saphira on February 17, 2004
    Yay!!! Another chappie!
    And I love it! You are the best! *hugs Hel*
    And you are cruel as well *growl*. Hope you won't let us hanging around for too long with this damn cliffhanger! *sniff*
    I want to read more! I want to know what happened! Please, please, please update soon!
    Thanks sooo much for your wonderful story!!!

    Hugs, Saphira
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on February 16, 2004
    wow this is a great story and I can't wait to hear what happens to them and I hope they get to Dumbledore soon and as all ways keep up with the great work.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 16, 2004
    Chapter 2... I do like how you are providing information the way that you are... wish you would have let Hermione & Draco finish their conversation though;-)

    The war room is a BRILLIANT addition to this story!!! You bring in the combined magic & muggle ways very well!!!

    I do hope that Albus will be found soon as it breaks my heart to know thateruserus is being unjustly punished this way!!! What is the deal with Ron? Something tells me that he knows something of value!!!

    I really do like the way that you are writing the characters so far, Draco, Harry & Hermione are all very believable, the way I could see them progressing from the books!!! I am looking forward to any more that you bring in as well as hou wou will be writing Severus later on in the story!!!

    Til chapter 3, deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Sci-Fi Nut/ JStockert on February 16, 2004
    Interesting story you have here. I look forward to reading more and finding out why Hermione wasn't at the battle.

    ~Jules
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on February 16, 2004
    Great story so far! You've done a nice job with Hermione's discomfort at having him, in that condition, living with her, and I likerry rry and Draco's reactions, also. Am eagerly awaiting your updates!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 16, 2004
    I love updates. This is gng ing interesting. I'm wanting to know why Ron is avoiding them, and I also want to know what's up with Hermione not being in the final battle. I also hope Snape snaps out of it soon too.
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 16, 2004
    Thanks for the update. Pacing seems good...I like how you are giving us only small tidbits of their history. Cannot wait to see a healthy Snape though ;-)
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  • From ANON - liquidscissors on February 14, 2004
    A most promising start!
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