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Reviews for Dead Inside

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  • From ANON - Saphira on February 13, 2004
    Hey there,

    I simply love this story. Ok, bad choice of s, cs, considering the main stref thf the story so far...
    But it's really great!!! I hope you'll continue this masterpiece of fanfiction stories!!!
    (A compliment! Feel happy! I do know a lot stories and I find very few to my liking! :-) )

    Hugs, Saphira
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 12, 2004
    I just finished reading chapter 1 & I do so hope that you will be adding more to this AMAZING piece soon!!! The subject matter is so sad, but I do like the way you are writing your version of this challenge!!!

    I like the fact that Hermione is working with Harry & Draco in this!!! Harry's attitude sort of surprised me, but I'm assuming that there is a very good reason that he wants Severus saved!!! I can't wait to find out what it is as well as how they will save him & if they will be able to find Albus!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on February 07, 2004
    Did you write "A Day in the Life of Severus Snape?" If you did, I am fangirling! It was the inspiration for me to start writing Snapefics. I just loved your interpretation of him. Anyway, I'm enjoying the story at hand very much and am eagerly anticipating an update. Many thanks!
    April
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 05, 2004
    Great start. I love how even though he seemed to have made their lives miserable (except for Draco), they risked a lot to get him back.
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  • From ANON - JestersTear on February 05, 2004
    I have just read your first chapter, and let me tell you that it filled my expectations completely. Thank you for taking a shot at this challenge, I hope to read mor of it soon.
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  • From ANON - Redone on February 03, 2004
    Very nice beginning, but you have very many run-on sentences.
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  • From ANON - scatteredlogic on February 03, 2004
    This is an excellent beginning and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story. You've already eluded to several intriguing possibilities. This particular challenge is very disturbing, simply because having someone as intelligent as Snape reduced to an automaton is so horrifying. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Jenny7611 on February 02, 2004
    Great start to the story. I like Hermione's anger and I'm glad Harry and Draco are there. I'm really looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 02, 2004
    Really good start. Hope you update soon! Is there going to be more background on why Harry, Hermione and Draco are together in this? Thanks for what promises to be a good read!

    susan
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