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Reviews for Cover Girl

By : BrightColors
  • From JenP10 on February 14, 2014
    Really enjoying the story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 20, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Almost Perfect on March 21, 2005
    uhu, Starbucks? Umm yea that
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  • From ANON - Mirina on January 16, 2005
    Someone watched Die Hard before they wrote chapter for....God, that's my favorite image...Severus in a suit...yummy
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  • From ANON - Katie on March 07, 2004
    Horrible. I couldn't even finish the second chapter. Why oh why did Hogsmeade sell out and have a Muggle coffee chain? This story just jumps right in and is very hard to follow. My suggestion is for you to read a lot of books, and notice how they actually build things up instead of just throwing them down on paper. You should also read the Harry Potter books and pay attention to the characterization of Hermione, or at least come up with a very plausible explanation as to why she would choose beauty over brains.

    Abysmal fic.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on February 16, 2004
    I like the story--there are a lot of interesting concepts with this story line. But, for me that is a problem. There were too many holes in the story: you didn't really go into detail about Severus's niece, where Ron went and what happened to Minerva, and how Snape just showed up when she went downstairs. Yes, he could have been watching her, but it was just too faulty for it to happen that way. Then, they have sex only for Hermoine to kick him out after it was over--I thought that she had a big crush on him.

    Anyway, there are a lot olesoles in the story that you need to clear up. Some of the things that happened seemed to be unplanned and it felt like they were just dropped into the story because you needed filler for the chapters. If anything, just plan out your chapter before you write it.


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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 08, 2004
    I did think this would be a campy kind of story, but it is coming across more dramatic. Interesting. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 07, 2004
    I'm sure its not your intention, but I'm just getting sad. I hope they get together soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 06, 2004
    Please make Snape confidegaingain soon! I feel so bad for the snarky guy. Great story so far...wasn't sure initially that I would like it, but I am loving it!!

    Susan
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  • From ANON - Brideofsnape on February 06, 2004
    Thar was sad. He gave her how many orgasms, and she just left without a word? Wake up Hermione.

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 05, 2004
    That was just sad. I feel sorry for him. thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 05, 2004
    A vulnerable Severus, that's different. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 05, 2004
    Interesting...Thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 04, 2004
    Interesting, usually Hermione is described as plain and ordinary. Super model? I did like to read where you take this. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on February 04, 2004
    Mmmmm...forceful Severus...mmmm... Looks like it's going to be a great piece keep up the good work and update soon!
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