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Reviews for Deliver Me

By : TriniMinx
  • From ProfSnape101 on September 08, 2009
    Hey-
    I love the story keep up the good work. I didn't take your review as a flame at all. but it seems that no one is getting the fact that its an AU story and i'm working on explaining for those that don't understand. i put up the flame warning bc i did get one when i asked that flames be emailed not posted because it's between me and them. but yes she does have a mother and it's in chapter 2 and i mentioned her again in chapter 3. can't wait to read more of your story tho!
    -Kay_Peace
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  • From Red33 on September 22, 2008
    Hi,

    I'm reading your rewrite and the story so far is very good. But, you double-posted chapter XVI - new beginnings and didn't post chapter XV. I hope you post chapter XV soon so I can continue to enjoy this story.

    Thanks
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  • From ahhsgirl07 on July 29, 2008
    It is midnight and I just finished your story. I loved it and I had to review and tell you so. The interaction between Severus and Hermione was perfect, dark and sexy at the same time. I love your plot too, very original. Thanks for finishing this... it was great!

    -MA
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  • From AyaChan2006 on July 25, 2008
    omg i loved this story i stay up till 1am jst to finish reading it...so that says it was gud...mind u there where a few things where u hadn't finished words so i had to guess at what they were so u might want to go thru it ur self n find them n fix them so i can read it agen with the right words not jst wat i think the words r

    Luvya Aya
    P.S keep going with the r writing ur gud n i hope there's a sequal to this one at some point
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on June 28, 2007
    This is such a good story! I can't wait for the update! Do you have a mailing list to let us know when you have updated? If you do put me on it please!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2005
    i think it's good but it's soooooooooooo strung out. u have repeated the same phrases and situations looooads of times.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2005
    sorry but your grammer and spelling make this story almost impossible to read.
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  • From ANON - betty on February 06, 2005
    He loves her, she loved him, suddenly, he hates her, she hates him. Rinse and repeat. Oh, wait, now she's sick again and he's taking care of her. The spiral continues....so it's time for me to get off and find a story that's not so redundant. Honestly. How can one character find another sexy when to the reader she seems like a boring, whiner with mood swings?
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on November 25, 2004
    I think it is a wonderful story and you shouldn't let the nit-pickers get to you.

    I hope you update.
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on September 02, 2004
    I love your story! Lots of twists and turns (hope it all turns out well in the end! LOL) ^_^
    Anyway, I hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Great job!
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kuronekosama90 on July 19, 2004
    i LURVELS this fic. its REALLY well done. the part where Hermione attacks snape and yells at him, i was starting to tear (amazing since apparently, im a cold person, my family tells me so). keep going!! update SOON!

    Neko
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  • From ANON - Static Wolf on July 03, 2004
    Wow...AWESOME story, the letters are probably meant to kill them or something? Are they going to open them and be blasted? Or maybe Hermione will walk in the room in time to stop them? What did Severus do? Will we ever find out? I LOVE Severus, he is the type of guy that I want. Strong, mysterious, alluring, dark, and full of secrets. I hope I can find a guy like that. This y isy is way AWESOME, it is about 11:00pm central time here and I have been up for 36 hours, and I have to do thundrundry, and take a bath before I go to bed and get up at 8 am. Oh well I will live, Severus and Hermione will get together right? Maybe you could have them finally talk about things and work together to stop the Death Eaters. Or maybe they should get together and Severus is made to do something horrible to Hermione... Yea okay I am going to stop my rambling, AWESOME story, I myself am a Slytherin. And my three favorite Slytherins are Severus (of course), Draco(when he isn't whimpering like a school girl, gods I hated that) and Lucius (only when he isn't evil father). I can't stress enough that this was a TOTALLY SPECTACTULAR story, the plot is great, the suspense, and the fights between Severus and Hermione. I have never liked Bella, maybe have Hermione kill her in spite, oh yea I forgot to stop rambling. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!! ^_^
    ~Static Wolf
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  • From ANON - AJ on July 02, 2004
    this is absolutely fantastic!
    i stayed up for 7 hours reading this.
    the relationships between the characters are SO well thought out, as is the story line.
    i recommend this story to anyone and everyone.

    cant wait for the next chapters...

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