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By : HermioneCosplayer

From ANON - spaz141 on February 29, 2004
If you are trying to make your readers torn between Draco and Harry for Hermione's affections - its working for me. I've mentioned before that I don't like Hr/D pairings, but your Draco seems to be IC and sincere. I am H/Hr primariloughough and if they work out yippy! I am enjoying reading, thanks.
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From zephyrs1desire on February 29, 2004
i have been bad about reviewing lately! But I am enjoying this story.. i love the Triangle developing between Harry Hermione and Draco.. !
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From ANON - calicat on February 29, 2004
Wow, this is a wonderful story. Full of conflicting emotions, this is wonderful. At this point I am rooting for Draco to come out the victor, since, well Draco is one of my absolutly favorite characters. So keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading.
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From ANON - elementaldeity on February 29, 2004
Another good chapter, Keep it up! Will Draco spill the beans tnny,nny, as far as how Harry and Hermione went? I can't wait for more. Besides who will end up with who?

elementaldeity
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From ANON - rubberduck on February 29, 2004
i know harry and hermione have some issues to work over but where is the 'unhealthy' bits you keep mentioning? i'm a bit slow and need things ted ted out to me. i really like this story. i especially liked the fact that your little servitude spell was compared to imperious. i guess i guessed correctly. the quidditch practice was great. it was funny to hear ron yell at the other players. and then harry flying around bit was also refreshing. harry having fun is um fun. hehe. i do have to say that some of yoialoialogue seemed to ramble on. many of what harry or hermione said while talking was a bit confusing. i had to read over the line several times before it became clear. the worst of it was "I can
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From ANON - Anon on February 29, 2004
It crossed Hermione
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From ANON - Queen Sabreen on February 28, 2004
Great, I can't wait till you update! One thing i don't get though, why is harry so emotionless? it's like he doesn't feel. You don't describe ch. 18 as good as the encounters with draco. anyways keep it up.
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From ANON - Bambu on February 28, 2004
You've really created an interesting set of ethics for Draco, which he's adhering to. It's a very appealing trait, integrity. And, he's being a gentleman about giving her time to explore her feelings for Harry, which ultimatare are unlikely to be as satisfying as the ntasntasy'. Hermione will be an interesting force to contend with as the gift of Slytherin sinks in, all that charisma, melding with a woman of intelligence, courage, and loyalty. This characterization of Harry is fascinating; he's not really quite a hero is he? You can see the uncertain young the the friend, the confused lover, and the strong man he may become, rolled all in one. He's not altogether likeable. Ginny and Ron, while not really peripheral, aren't really pivotal thus far. I can see the dynamics of the group shifting and melding and being tempered over the course of time, and when interwoven with the external politics of the wizarding world, this is an extremely layered story you're telling. I'm looking forward to your next intriguing chapter.
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From ANON - traydr vic on February 25, 2004
Wow! Lovely chapter! I take back anything derogatory I may have said about Hermoine. I really loved her in this chapter. Even though she has all the power she seems so vulnerable and so completely in love with Harry. I almost have hope that she and Draco are a thing of the past. Harry still seems a bit of a prat, but he is, after all, just a 17 year old boy. Great line by the way - "I'm 17. I get an erection when the wind blows". Their first lovemaking was very sweet. Harry's staying power isn't exactly "draconian" but at least he gave her pleasure before he lost it. Hermoine seemed to be more interested in the intimacy than the sex anyway. This is a really great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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From ANON - rubberduck on February 24, 2004
another excellent chapter. you certainly have a way with words. i especially liked the line "I'm 17. I get an erection when the wind blows." hilarious. the servitude spell seems an awful lot like imperious, but i guess that's to be expected when it's a gift from salazaar slytherin. i'm glad you didn't really use it for their first time. but even though you didn't use it, it seemed it wasn't such a good time in bed for harry or hermione. sure there was a bit of gratification but h see seemed rather upset and used even while trying to perform. i was kind of expecting a slower build to the sex and not just a quick (and unfilling) jump in the bed right off the bat. hopefully there will be more seduction or growing feelings between hermione and harry as time goes on.
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From ANON - XxphoenixX on February 24, 2004
No time for a longer review, but geat chapter! Am very interested in the attempts at a Hermione sandwich... t you you could have a ficlet of Fred and George trying to bed Hermione... maybe even succeeding? Am I asking for too much? Maybe. But it'd be nice. Actually, it wouldn't. It would be very naughty. ;). Once again, great chapter, glad to see things moving along... blahblahblah UPDATE
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From ANON - SilverWolf on February 24, 2004
Mmmm...

Really like the way you see Luna. Stands to reason that she will be good at picking up deatails!
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From ANON - spaz141 on February 24, 2004
I wonder what Harry's going to do about Ginny now? I really didn't expect that so soon, at least it was a more realistic first time. I'm not really confused maybe just bewildered, I await more.

btw that was an interesting way to respond to reviews - I've never seen that before. thanks.
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From ANON - jeannette on February 24, 2004
too bad draco was headboy,if i were hermione,i would have choosen him for the slythirin gift.
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on February 24, 2004
Wonderful fic! I was just sad that there was no more to read tonight. Please update soon. I would love to see a DM/HG ending though. What can I say, I'm a sucker for the forbidden pair!
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