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Reviews for What Hermione Wants

By : HermioneCosplayer
  • From ANON - ele on February 20, 2004
    o god the last line of this chapter was so funny
    its priceless cant wait to hear what the professers face looks like an her reaction
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 20, 2004
    Holy Crap! I cant believe she picked Slytherin! That was so unexpected. And poor Harry, so noble, not even realizing what he is walking i. I . I hope Hermione can get Harry out of her system and be with Draco, they belong together more than Harry and Hermione.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Introspect on February 20, 2004
    Absolutely incredible, and strangely baffling at the same time...Draco and the gift of Gryffindor, now there's one I didn't see coming. And I LOVE the whole thing with Harry thinking Hermione's marrying Draco, it's so classic! His comment does show a lot about his feelings though...incredible writing...can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - MadAboutHarry on February 20, 2004
    Well, that was a surprising ceremony! Love Harry's comments at the end to McGonagall. They certainly showed an interesting predisposition toward Hermione, but I wonder what he is going to think when he finds out what is really going on....... Thanks for the quick update. I hope the next one is also quick!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 20, 2004
    harry thinks she's pregnant. that's hilarious. always the hero eh. you are so detailed in your story. little things like the frog closures on the robe really bring the story to life. it's very interesting to see the confliction in hermione. on one hand she wants harry. on the other, draco. i really wonder who she will end up with. draco's selection was interesting. it can't be just a throw away selection for him. i wonder what's up. still some errors in the story. i know you know that but it's distracting to read a line where it has 'hs' s' or 'the additional the'. i hope you understand what i mean. either way very interesting and i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 20, 2004
    Ohhhh. what is that Draco up to? That was an unexpected move. Very interest and thanks.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 20, 2004
    Wow, that was a BIG assumption on Harry's part. Is he actually going to be relieved to find why he has been summoned? Thanks for the chuckle at the of of your chapter.
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  • From ANON - msmalcontent on February 20, 2004
    This is great You've had a really original idea for a fic. Well one I haven't seen before . Well done and I'll be staying with this to see how it develops.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on February 18, 2004
    Oops - big mistake on my review. I meant to say I pray Hermoine ends up with Harry, not with herself.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on February 18, 2004
    I found this little gem while reading your portkey story "but I thought YOU loved her" (which I like very much). I love this storyt ist isy wey well written, great descriptions, and has me waiting for the next installment. I am very nervous about all the Hermoine/Draco foreplay, as I am very much an H/Hr shipper (hence portkey). But what a scenario you present! Harry's in denial, Draco's a gentleman and Hermoine is emotionally (and morally?) rudderless. Very juicy! Hermoine promising sex to Draco if he delivers Harry - big mistake! Huge!

    I realize this is your story and therefore my opinion has little sway, but I am praying you will have Hermoine end up with Hermoine. From your A/N in portkey it sounds like you still haven't made up your mind. D/Hr is just wrong!!

    Please update soon. I check twice a day. Thanks for a great story.
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  • From ANON - MadAboutHarry on February 16, 2004
    This has certainly taken an interesting turn in the last chapter. I'd really like to see her take the Ravenclaw or Gryffindor gift, as I think she would in character, but this also is intriguing. Please don't mess up all her friendships in her quest with Draco though. I'd like to see her retain her friendships with Ron, Harry and Ginny at the end of this......
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  • From ANON - ghypscee on February 15, 2004
    great story, but i really don't want herm to take the slytherin gift. i hope you will take a completely unexpected turn and have her take the ravenclaw or gryfindor gift where she could learn all new ways to make harry want her. can't you see her soaking up the knowledge of the malfoy dark arts books? hmmm, interesting and something to think about, i hope! great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Anna on February 15, 2004
    OH MY GODDESS!!! Wow, I am SO addicted, but, because I am evil I feel I must somehow flame...I think maybe you have trouble when entering the story because the mistakes I find are more in the way of mistakes made when typing up a copy while distracted, I hereby humbly beg to beta for an incredible story teller, puhleese????? ok, done being pathetic, so, when's the next chappie?
    Love, Hugs, Kisses and Blessings,
    the decidedly deranged,
    Anna
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  • From ANON - trattel on February 15, 2004
    yummy.plz update soon!
    what a story
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  • From ANON - EmpressGoddess on February 15, 2004
    Yuor story is so great, I love it. I usually don't reveiw but I love this story so much. I hope it will be Hermione and Draco in the end, I love them together, but I also like the whole thing with Harry too, but I'm still hoping for a D/Hr story in the end. Keep writing and hope to se an undate soon. :)
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