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Reviews for an unlikely match...

By : h0lden
  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 11, 2004
    I'm holding my breath. It's up to you - either I die of asphyxiation or you post the next chapter SOON!

    THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!! Squeeeeeee!

    Kait x
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  • From ANON - Aimee on March 10, 2004
    I read every bit of this story today and I love it. It's maddening this isn't finished. Please update.
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  • From ANON - crudedly on March 10, 2004
    aaaaaaaaaaaaah, don't! just update, pleeeeaaaase!
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  • From ANON - Javen Green on March 09, 2004
    Wow Wow WOW! That was amazing. And thanks for that absolutly horrific cliff hanger. : ( Hurry up and update! I can't wait until everything is resolved- it will be bloody fabulous.
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  • From iamlikethis on March 09, 2004
    I object !!
    Guess who that is ?? The spy of course.
    Bet it's Ron. He's been conspicious by his absence since the beginning.
    I just have the hunch that he's the one doing all the secret listening. The wedding scene was very very well written. *claps loudly*
    Holden you rock!!

    Cheers!!
    Sohara
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  • From ANON - beautifuldreamer on March 09, 2004
    i cant believe you left it there that is sooo mean, lol i love this story i cant wait to see what happens next your a great writer
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  • From ANON - patsche on March 09, 2004
    my, you enjoy drawing things out, don't you. You are driving me crazy!!
    but otherwise, great story :)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 09, 2004
    thank G someone objected! Its the mother isn't it? I was almost having a heart-attack and damn their pride. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Napea on March 08, 2004
    Oi, you're killing me here! Your story has had me on the edge of my seat since I started reading it. Who objected? Oh, please update soon. Your story would have to be my all time favorite HG/SS...oi bugger that it's my favorite Harry Potter fanfic. Just to be a slight nitpicker I noticed a few typos (nonesomuch that I couldnfigufigure out what you were trying to say) other than that your imagination, originality, writting style, updating is simply wonderful! Please put up the next chapter soon I about died when you left that cliffhanger! I WILL be back ^_~
    Napea
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  • From Bellatrix on March 08, 2004
    I was dubious about reading this story because I thought it would be HG/OFC but with an eventual HG/SS pairing... how wrong I was and how glad I am to have begun to read it. I'm utterly hooked now. I love this story... one of the best I've read in a while. Please update again soon.
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  • From iamlikethis on March 08, 2004
    Dancing In The Dark with Snape.What would I not give for that. *sighs wistfully *
    I cant wait to see how you'll make Hermione change her mind now that Austere has Ginny's approval. Thanks for the quick updates.

    Cheers !!
    Sohara
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 08, 2004
    I am aghast at the way nasty Austere seems to be getting his way. The absolute tosser!

    This isn't a flame, just telling you how much I am getting swept into your brilliant story.

    The confusion that Hermione experiences at the dance was almost too much to bear...
    although I am sure you will make it all right in the end...
    or will you?

    Please update again soon before I get completely miserable! You're brilliant, holden.

    Kait (LovesThePotionBoy) x


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  • From ANON - crudedly on March 08, 2004
    oh my god, really, that love potion does miracles, hmm?
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  • From ANON - yncarn8 on March 08, 2004
    I'd hate for you to take this as a critisism, because I am really loving this story. But I have noticed there is some confusion. For instance Hermione is wearing her ball gown in Snape's room then next chapter she's wearing her wedding dress. Then she goes to the ball in her ball gown again and then is described as sitting in her wedding dress again. I not noticed in the last chapter you called Severus Austere at one point.

    As I said at first - I love this story and I eagerly await each update and the minor problems (and they are extremely minor) do little to detract from it.

    Please update soon and Pleaaaaase don't let her marry that shit. I hope the spy is old Ma Snape and that she kicks Austere's arse out of it for good and all.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 08, 2004
    God, I hope Ginny's wrong about that last statement. You write the tension well. Thanks.
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