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Reviews for Harry Potter and Gaining Momentum

By : Ryanaven
  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2004
    you ROCK!!!
    this story so kicks ass!
    i can't wait for the sequals
    i plan on lokking up your site
    i hope you post soon
    could you please email me when you do
    pretty please?
    i would love to read the stories
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2004
    you ROCK!!!!!
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  • From ANON - starlitRena on June 26, 2004
    oh my god!!! I love this story so much, and the ending is so so great. I can't wait to read the next part!
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  • From ANON - CC on June 20, 2004
    I think you are a very imaginative writer and I am enjoying where your story is going. That being said, it is fairly hard to read at times as I am stopped not only by spelling errors, but your using the wrong word ('tomb'-a grave when you mean 'tome' a book, for instance) or a word in the wrong form of speech or just used incorrectly ('abashed' when I assume you mean 'accusingly' or something like it). I got to the third chapter and just had to stop. I want to go back to the story, but I find it tiring to be reading and editing in my head at the same time. You need an editor or a beta reader. Your story is good and could be great but the errors are jarring. Because you are not a professional writer is not an excuse to not be careful, however it is one that way too many fan fiction writers use. Don't be one - you are too promising a writer not to be as careful as possible with your story. If you went to your friend's house [who was an amateur cook] for dinned shd she said "I know I used some of the wrong ingrediants in the wrong proportions and cooked things at the wrong temperature but hey eat it anyway..."would that be all right with you? I really really hope you think about what I have said, and as I say I do plan to go back to the story, I am looking forward to seeing where you are planning to take it. Gouck.uck.
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  • From ANON - Amaly_Malfoy on May 18, 2004
    My domain in the English language is very bad, I read your fic with help of a translator, that even and when it does not make it perfect, at least if it allows me to continue the idea of the history.

    I congratulate you on the history, it is very good. I congratulate you also for being the person that you are, Franc, sincere, without folds. I admire your work as I admire the human being that you are. Without importing the sexual trends or the personal tastes, finally you are wonderful to the sincere being, besides the fact that you are an excellent writer. Soon I will recapture my courses of English to be able to enjoy your work in her original language.

    I will continue reading your fic, so I will register to your group but please, a bit obliging with me, the Spanish is my native and alone language a bit of your language. I would like to be able to leave you a review that was reflecting the wonderful thing that makes me your fic, but doubt that there stays well the translation of this mail and then I prefer not committing a mistake.



    In Spanish:

    Mi dominio en el idioma ingles es muy malo, le
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  • From ANON - dedmun on May 13, 2004
    good writer. great writer. totally love this story. i especially like the way you solved the pansy problem. only hope draco will be ok with the slytherins and voldemort.

    totally can't wait for the next. keep up the STUPENDOUS work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2004
    love it and hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Ptty on April 28, 2004
    excellent story. Been trying to c up up for a while, just really long. That's a good thing. Keep up the good work.
    ~palkitty
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  • From ANON - Midnight Fairy on April 28, 2004
    absolutely love your story and hope you update soon
    please email me so i can continue reading it
    keep writting
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  • From ANON - lucifer geek on April 22, 2004
    OK SO DOES THAT MEAN THAT YOU ARENT GOING TO UPDATE ON THIS SITE ANYMORE??????????????
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  • From ANON - alex on April 15, 2004
    hey, this story is really really really good. it has the quality of JK herself, and sounds like it could verywell be in the 6th book. i think you did an excellent job of keeping the charactors in charactor. Relly great job. i hope that you update this story soon. it is one of my favorites
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  • From ANON - Larva on April 14, 2004
    Fantastic! I can say nothing more nor less! You are a brilliant writer and I think I am falling in love with you ;) Great job!

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  • From ANON - Kitty on April 12, 2004
    OMG! A great series. It felt like I was reading the 6th book. Well of course Draco and Harry wouldn't be at it..but hey it could happen, in my wet dreams hehe ^.^. Oh, and too bad your gay. I mean I think thats hot and everything, but damn it! Its always the hot guys who are gay and that must mean you are totally hot. OH and reading one of the chapters where you explained some of the stuff, I think that you shouldn't have explained it, I think that people who are smart enough should have rzed zed what some stuff is and how someone can gnowlnowledge for different spells and artifacts. I mean a lot of the English language originates from Latin. So researching the Origin from J.K. Rowling's spells can show where they come from, and someone can actually make another spell and everything. So all I wanted to say was great job, keep up the good work and mail me when another chapter comes up. I'm looking forward to it. And I can't believe I actually sounded intellegent for once...if I'm wrong with nething, please dun burst my bubble. ^.^
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  • From ANON - dedmun on April 11, 2004
    what a great chapter! you're still an evil doer, though, as i haven't seen a 'the end' anywhere yet. however, i live in anticipation of finally finishing your stupendous story. keep up the great work. can't wait for the next.
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  • From CoryJ on April 10, 2004
    here's my thought

    you print this out and hand it to JKR and tell her to use it as the 6th book, you think it will work?

    well other than the whole Draco Harry thing I don't think she would be to keen on that but it IS all part of a vaiulable plot I say go for it
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