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Reviews for Harry Potter and Gaining Momentum

By : Ryanaven
  • From Lillyrose on December 22, 2016

    There is no writing here


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  • From xxreighxx on January 19, 2012
    This story is really good, but it's riddled with so many coding and formatting errors that it makes it nearly impossible to get through. You should really go back and fix all of the format coding you have in there, or delete it entirely because I really want to finish the story...I just can't stand every other word being broken up by a line of coding. It's really difficult to have to just skip whole paragraphs because their full of coding errors.
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  • From spikesbitch on June 15, 2008
    hi, i've loved this story. i've been flicking through the back pages of the AFF site and tried to access the yahoo group to read the sequel. The group, as i'm sure you know, is no longer there and i am dying to find out what happens with everything. draco, harry, pansy and the egg situation, the elemental spells now harry can access rowena's chambers, voldemort, snapes (hopeful) recovery.
    please email me if the story does indeed exist. tanyajones71@hotmail.com
    many thanks for the plot and words.
    tanya
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  • From Auroawinter on May 30, 2007
    Hiyas, Though I havent finished reading this story I thought I would add a bit of input (i've just finished reading chapter 8 and was getting ready to start 9 but I have work and need sleep soon LOL) anyway Im a bit confused on your story. I think its bloody brilliant so far but I get the feeling from the last chapter or so that some of your writing may be missing from the story. Where one chapter end then next chapter doesnt pick up and I get left with the feeling Im missing something important. I started reading a bit of chapter 9, at the end of chapter 8 you had hermoine getting ready to ask dumbles something and then the start of chapter 9 you have moine, harry and professor Mcgonall heading to the headmasters talking about someone using the imperious curse on someone.. that totally threw me for a loop and lost me, again I feel like vital info was left out, wether intentionally or unintentionally by you Im unclear of, but I thought I would mention it if it was a glitch or something LOL.. anyway I look forward to hopefully finish reading this story tomorrow if I can

    Ja ne

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Obsidian Phoenix on August 12, 2006
    I have been reading your story and and even though the whole concept and the idea but it is somewhat confusing due to the fact that as soon as you get into something it jumps to something else. Like for instance they left the train on which something obviously happened to the next day with Harry being upset. Then there is the instance when the went into the chamber of secrets and was obviously cleaning then it suddenly jumps to them getting each other off and there are a few other intances as well but I won't dwell on them. I would love to finish reading your story but as of now it is a bit confusing. It is like reading a bunch of little short stories that have nothing to do with each other but at the same time are somehow connected.
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  • From ANON - jo on July 12, 2006
    cool

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  • From ANON - Startled Bum on July 10, 2006
    Heh, well first off, I must admit that I loved this fic. But I am concerned about the yahoo group thing, because every time I try the link, it says "Group Not Found There is no group called gaining_momentum_series. Please make sure you typed the web address correctly. If you have done so, the group may no longer exist." And I was just wondering if you had deleted it?

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2005
    my dear, all of your chapters are screwed. THey're missing writing from them, heaps of it and making huge plot holes. Anyway, please fix them, i happen to like this story

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  • From ANON - H/D on October 11, 2005
    I have to say, this is one of the most frustrating fanfic i've ever read..It's out of ORDER...In grammar, and punctuations etc..Are you doing it on purpose or what??I'm really seriously thinking that you are becuz most or some of your sentences/grammar makes no sense and there's very little to no Harry/Draco at all...The fanfic in itself is an alright read, which disappointed greatly due to the many GREAT reviews posted by readers...

    Any one of the chapters is missing..

    Overall, your fanfic is not THY worst ever read..

    Hopefully you're not angry by my honest response to your fanfic...


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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2005
    Wow, I'm so confused. Nothing happens in order or anything and there is no timeline or explanasions to speak of. One moment they're talking about Harry taking the wards, then the next chapter Ron attacked malfoy on the train and cursed him (don't remember reading that) then Harry wakes up in Poppy's...wth? Seriously, somethings majorly wrong here.
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  • From ANON - Tali on July 27, 2005
    Hi... I'm not meaning to be rude... but I'm trying hard to read what appears to be a good fic... and well.. each and EVERY chapter up to 13 (I haven't gotten passed it) seems to have CHUNKS missing. It started small in chapter one with words or scentences missing. And now there are ENTIRE pieces of the story missing. Example: One minute Draco and Harry are cleaning the Chamber of Secrets... and then they are having sex on a bed! I have NO idea what happened... another example: Harry was about to step up tp pick his staff materials and suddenly he was picking wood! No mention at all of what jewl he got... its really mucking up a good fic! Please please see if you can fix it? Some of the chapters appear to end in the middle of a scene and then the next chapter will pic up in what seems like the middle of a new scene. Its kind of confusing. Also 13 just POOFS in the middle of a sentence it ends the chapter. Please let me know if it gets fixed. Thank yoU!!
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  • From ANON - Shadowolf on July 23, 2005
    Your missing part of the story on Chapter 7 Sorry to bother you I just wanted you to know. Also this is one of my favriote storys ever.
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  • From ANON - Pureblood on April 29, 2005
    Nice work! It's a bit confusing with the changes in text all the time. Jumping from one scene to the next without page splits, but wonderful nonetheless!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on April 28, 2005
    I joined your group! It's taken me almost 24 hours (not all reading) but I've finally finished your story! It's fantastic! Though there were a few times you switched scenes and it left me horribly confused. But I muddled through it. So chapter 33 won't be posted here? Will you send a note through the group?
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  • From ANON - Firit i on February 13, 1920
    Well as you can see I'm too youn to be able to read the sequel at yahoo....so here I am waiting the new chapter...crying:(
    Harry Potter and Gaining momentun was unbelievable.I just loved it.It had so much action...what I mean is that there was lots of elemets that you used very well even the veela thing. And Sevvie was just adorable;)
    Clearly you have a huge imagination and you know how to use it to create something like this.
    Hope you post the new chapter soon:)Love your story.
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