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By : ceruleanblue
  • From ANON - Jess. on April 04, 2004
    GET LOST SIRIUS!! I loved this chapter, look forward to more.....Jess
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  • From ANON - ceruleanblue on March 23, 2004
    Wthanthanks for the review..uh...Msully? Forgive me if I dont spit rit right cause I don't have the window open at the moment..*looks sheepish* going on the ol memory here!

    CB
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  • From ANON - msulli on March 23, 2004
    oh my god that was great. i love the story please keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Sher on March 17, 2004
    I'm back after an enforced hiatus (computer died and got replaced). Hope you had a great Spring Break!

    These last two chapters were very good. Speaking as someone who has an infuriatingly perfect older sister, I can identify with Tara's frustration with her sibling, h shh she portrayed in a very realistic way. In my case, my sister and I get along well, but just once I'd like to catch her picking her nose or something ;-D. To tarnish the image...just a bit.

    So Reginald is messing around in another henhouse. I was wondering what you were going to do with him. I loved the way Sirius comforted Tara, both as Archie and as himself (GAH...especially as himself. If Mr. Black kissed me like that, I'd have to be peeled off the ceiling, whether I was asleep or not). Well, must head for the cold showers now (overactive imagination kicking in).

    Happy writing!

    Cheers!
    Sher
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  • From ANON - Jess. on March 16, 2004
    Sirius has it all planned , but I bet it doesn't come off as well as he'd hoped.....Jess.
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  • From ANON - kelly4077 on March 11, 2004
    It looks like you may have talent, but you're wasting it on writing things like this piece of garbage. "Tara Lachlan"?? Give me a break. Your wording is awkward, your ideas are recycled and boring, and what's more--you smell.
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  • From ANON - Jess. on March 03, 2004
    Her sisters very calm andtroltrolled isn't she, great chapter, look forward to more... Jess.
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  • From ANON - Sher on February 27, 2004
    Great chapter! I was hoping you'd do a Sirius POV. I was bursting at the seams wondering what he'd be thinking about everything that has happened and it looks like he is going to use this whole situation to his advantage, and have fun with it as well. Given his proclivity to mischief, and his cleverness, how could he not? What a guy...:D.

    I think you kept Sirius' attitude towards women very real. Considering the time he was put in prison, and the fact that he was cut off from the outside world the entire time, he most certainly wouldn't have had much exposure to little things like women working, voting, wearing pants, etc... (Smell that? It's just a little sarcasm directed at our boy ;D). In this story, his views totally work. Not only that, his chauvinism and Tara's independence will almost certain get two sets of knickers in a twist, and fast (all together now..."Sexual Tension"). Hee heeeeee...:D.

    Keep this up. You're doing a great job! And thanks for the smattering of smut.

    Cheers!
    Sher




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  • From ANON - Sher on February 24, 2004
    This was a great chapter! The Azrael Block was very interesting and I'm even happier that Tara can't perform it. IMHO, by giving the talent to a supporting character, you provided even more proof that Miss Tara is more than the sum of a Mary Sue, in case anyone doubts. Congrats!

    LOL...Archie! She named the dog Archie! I don't quite know why, but I think that name is hysterical for a dog (especially this dog)! :D.

    Quote: "It was really nice to have a friend that didn't evaluate her success percentages, bug her for sex, or try to set her up with his oldest son." Hmmm...bug her for sex (don't get out that vibrator just yet, dearie :D. Remember, the guy was in PRISON!). Personally, I wouldn't kick him out of bed and I suspect Tara won't either. Reginald better watch himself. He's a nice boy and all, but in matters of the heart, he seems to be dumber than a bag of hair :D.

    End my two cents.

    Cheers!
    Sher

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  • From ANON - Jess on February 24, 2004
    Nicely done, so now Sirius has the upper hand so to speak knowing exactly what his tracker is up to, nternteresting to see how cosy archie is going to get .......Jess
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  • From ANON - ceruleanblue on February 23, 2004
    Yeah, she has telepathy as well as prophetic powers. I see Isobel as a very reluctant medium of sorts, and a character that I'd like to explore a little more. She kinda came about by accident, but I'm looking forward to fleshing her out. I'm glad you didn't mind my little trek into family life, but I felt like I needed to give some background on Lachlan so that it would be easier to comprehend some of the choices she makes in later chapters.

    Anyway, that's my little clarification!
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  • From ANON - Sher on February 23, 2004
    Well done :D!

    I really like the family background you've provided. I couldn't help but wonder if Isobel's gift is somehow going to come into play in future chapters, because I found it interesting that she possesses an ability that could possibly allow her to see into people's thoughts (if I've read this correctly). I can't wait to see where you take this (smut and all...hint, hint ;-D).

    Was Sirius following Tara? Either way, I'm sure that our favourite Animagus will somehow use this new situation to his advantage and I can't wait to see how ;-D.

    Wonder how our doggie likes being bathed :D...

    Cheers!
    Sher


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  • From ANON - Jess. on February 22, 2004
    Well described again, Interesting that she will be giving our Sirius a bath without even realizing it, that's if he lets her!.....Jess
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  • From ceruleanblue on February 21, 2004
    Lol. Sher. No, Reggie is not our convict. Actually, think Paris and think a lovely singing voice. I stoles him, I did. Sorry, went all Gollum....

    And I shall check out the sexy Black...hmm. Im actually writing now, amazingly enough. Damn lack of Sirius het fic is driving me up the wall. Ahh well.

    CB
    PS--Oh, the part I'm working on is smutty. Let's just say that the voyeur warning isnt just there as window dressing ;)
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  • From ANON - Sher on February 21, 2004
    Oops. I could have sworn that I remembered to fill in my name. Sorry!
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