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By : ceruleanblue

From ANON - Jess on June 27, 2004
Yeah of course I'm still reading it so Update you can't leave it hanging there, and where is Sirius?
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From ANON - Sher on June 26, 2004
Oh, yes. I'm still reading, although I've been having problems getting on this site over the past few weeks, so I've been getting to read more than one chapter at a time (the only upside :D). I guess the traffic has really increased, because I keep getting the message that there are "too many connections". I assume that I'm not the only one who has had this problem.

Just so you know, I think you're still doing a wonderful job with this fic and I'm looking forward to finding out what Lucius (my second favourite character) and Reginald have in store for Tara. Knowing these two, it won't be pretty, but it will make for great reading.

Poor Lupin is really caught between a rock and a hard place though, isn't he?

Cheers!
Sher
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From ANON - Jess. on June 08, 2004
Oh nice one, I do hope Harry finds out the truth, I hate hin thinking Sirius is a murderer, Looking forward to more.
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From ANON - Sher on May 10, 2004
Happy Mother's Day to me! Great update. I was looking forward to Snape ;D.

Gotta love those Slytherins. That was a very interesting meeting between Tara and Sev. In fact, I'm willing to bet some of my major organs that Snape definitely got more out of that encounter than he's letting on. He obviously knows that something is up, but to me, his words to her seemed to be more in the nature of advice for her to exercise caution and keep her emotions under control rather than outright warnings or threats of what could happen if the Ministry caught wind of what she was up to (delivered in sarcastic Snape-style, of course).

Since this fic is AU (aren't they all now...), I can't wait to hear what Lupin has to say about all of this. Perhaps the words of an Auror will be enough to bring him around, or at least persuade him to keep his mouth shut.

Cheers!
Sher

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From ANON - Jess on May 09, 2004
It's his dark snarky side I love , his sarcasim is such a turn on, but he doesn't hold a candle to my sex god Sirius *sighs contently* , nice chappy, Did severus see something in her eyes? and now onto our lovely werewolf.aww.
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From ANON - CB on May 08, 2004
Lol! Yes, I'm quite the accomplished Legilimens and I've been lifting fantasies from Sher Black's brain....

Seriously, I love writing the incorrigible Mr. Black. He's a character that Rowling barely touches on in the books, only as much as it suits Harry's story, and it leaves a lot to the imagination. I don't know about you, my my favorite "Blackism" to write would have to be the pillow talk in this chapter..it even beats his "I'm an Aquarius" speech back in chapter ten! I can just see him sprawled out on that bed all sexy...similar to the picture you linked me to a few months ago. Heheh. You definitely have to email me sometime when I'm out of the country so I can keep my brain on Mr. Black...

CB

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From ANON - Sher on May 08, 2004
Holy Hell!

What is it about Sirius Black?? Every word the man utters causes me to reel around like I've been on a weeklong bender (and don't pretend you don't know which part of your story I'm referring to either *wink*). That man has raised pillow talk to an art form and if I didn't know better, I'd swear you'd been rummaging around in my fantasies. Not that I'm complaining, mind you :D. Good God, even man man's NAME is sexy.

Overall, this story is getting curiouser and curiouser...in a very good way. Now the lovely Tara is going to have the honour of meeting SNAPE, of all people. That should thrill our Animagus immensely...not :D. I still can't wait to see where you take this, and how you're going to redeem Sirius in the eyes of the wizarding world (hint, hint ;D).

Sorry, couldn't help that last part...I just love the guy to pieces and that will never change!

Cheers!
Sher
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From ANON - Jess on May 07, 2004
Oh lets see how she handles our snarky potions master, and what will be Remus's reactions, .......Jess
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From ANON - Cerulean Blue on May 04, 2004
Thanks for all the reviews, guys! I was a little worried about posting chapter 12 since it was sorta deviant, but glad to know it was well-received. In other news, I did pass analytical chem: C+ baby! Yeah! And I'm proud of this why? Cause I took the bloody exam with an ear infection, the flu, and a broken foot. Yes. A broken foot.

CB
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From ANON - Sher on May 04, 2004
Very nice! These two are complimenting each other so well in this story. I don't know though...Tara really needs to sort out those priorities of hers ;D. After all, she'd just shagged a certifiably hot wizard who hadn't seen a woman in thirteen years and here she is worrying about finding clothes, and with him STILL IN HER BEDROOM. Perhaps the poor girl is just feeling lightheaded, yes? Call me a stickler for details, but the only concerns I'd be having would be where and how to shag the guy next (hey, this IS Sirius we're talking about here...).

Still a great story. Keep it up!

Cheers!
Sher

PS - I agree with the others about JKR. If I owned Sirius, I would have played much nicer with him.
PPS - Have fun on your trip(s) :D!

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From ANON - Jess again on May 03, 2004
I agree with your previous reviewer, 'Outcasts' is excellent, I know you would like it, No Sirius but it has Remus!
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From ANON - Jess. on May 03, 2004
Loved it , He is so , so sexy, cute and gorgeous,
What the hell was J.K thinking, does the woman have no feelings, Arh!!!.

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From ANON - still_in_depression on April 18, 2004
Gods, that felt good!!
After finishing the 5th book (and facing the unfair end of Sirius) i've been seeking the comfort in fanfics ;__;
I was tired of "Sirius facing with his old love", "Sirius finds love after Azkaban and guess what? She is still a virgin" --_--U
There r so many of these fics that i really feel like i'm reading the different versions of the same thing....
Anyway - this is one of the cutest and loveliest fics of Siri - honestly, one of my favs *-*
I'd like to see updates - can't wait for the next chapter (=^.^=)

Ps - Outcasts is one of my favs also , thanks for recomending it :)

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From ANON - C. Blue on April 06, 2004
Wow, thanks for the reviews guys!

Jess: Yeah, I've longed to tell Sirius the exact same thing! He's so damn sexy... Thanks, as always, for your comments.

Sher: Thanks for your praise on a chapter that was insanely difficult for me to write. Your responses always leave a smile on my face, so I try to read them before scampering off to analytical chem... I always get a kick out of reading what you have to say and it pleased me to see that your mind thinks the way mine does. (That may or may not be a good thing ;) Sirius isn't going to grow up any time soon, and more sex will come. It was just really difficult this time because I didn't feel that Tara Lachlan was the sort of woman to have crazy, kinky sex with a man she was somewhat angry at. The next few chapters, however, will be extremely plotty. I'll try to include some romantic moments, but thern'tn't be any more smut for a little while. :(

Anyone else: I encourage you to speak up! I love to hear comments on my work, be they good or bad. I'm always open to suggestions and appreciate soppy praise like anyone. So, if you like this piece of dri spe speak up!
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From ANON - Sher on April 05, 2004
Uh oh...I sense a misunderstanding coming on ;-D. It seems our boy is growing up, not too much though (pretty please). After all, where would the fun be in that? Reginald alone is anal enough for three people, so we still need Sirius to counterbalance him in Tara's eyes (I noticed that she's already starting to make poex cex comparisons...hee heeeee). My advice to her: Dump the schmuck and go for a real man!! :D

I agree with you about smut being hard to write, especially non-gratitutious smut. That said, I thought what you did here was totally sweet, and just what the two of them needed. Sirius has really fallen for her and I'm very curious as to how he's going to handle that. At least he got some of his memories back, seeing as how Tara finally got laid properly. He could give a few lessons to Reginald (who DIDN'T spend twelve years in Azkaban), although I have a feeling that our Animagus would not take too kindly to Reg should he come sniffing around Tara again. Sirius does have a temper, and based on that alone, I wouldn't think he'd be prone to sharing his lovers (in a het fic, at least). I could be off base, but that's my view of the guy.

Keep up the great work!

Cheers!
Sher

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