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Reviews for Thank you, Miss Granger

By : Clarinet
  • From ANON - Alicia on June 25, 2004
    Oh My gosh! That was so awesome!You just have to write more!Don't keep me waiting k?
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on June 25, 2004
    Aw, yet another wonderfully written s...w...with more action going on (yay!). I was curious as to why Snape would refer to Hermione as his lover? Was it sitting up for something done the road or just merely a thought of Snape's at the time? I thought it was creative how you said "the Devil in a girl' shape" instead of saying something like 'the devil in disguise' or something else equally overused. Throughout the story you have great sentences like "...her feelings did not poison him like other people...". I normally don't use when authors use the word penis during a sexy scene but I thought that it was very tastefully used in "her mouth was soft and warm on his penis," it really felt the feel of the passage. Very rude way to end the chapter....Great way, mind you, from an author
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  • From ANON - Alicia on June 18, 2004
    Hey!This story is awesome!Please write more!I'm gonna die if I can't read anymore!
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  • From ANON - Persia on June 18, 2004
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left us hanging about what 'Mione is going to do to young Sevy! Inquiring minds want to know! Please Please Please!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on June 11, 2004
    That's it?! That's as long as you made the chapter?! I can't believe it! It's such an interesting story ... I look forward to the next installment ...
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  • From ANON - Greenstuff on June 07, 2004
    Excellent Chapter. I don't think young Sev is quite ready for what Hermione has in store for him *cackles* looking forwards to more.
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  • From ANON - Sare Liz on June 06, 2004
    Clarinet,

    This is wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it. I love the interplay between Hermione and Severus. All the way though I'm constantly reminded that everytime Prof S. deals with her, he has this in mind. No great wonder he sent her back. I can't wait to see how it ends up.


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  • From ANON - XRaven on June 06, 2004
    Will Hermione be sharing her conclusion about the tears with Severus? Hopefully it will not be immediately, however...quite definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Persia on June 06, 2004
    Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOU for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy (shining eyes). I just saw the new yesterday and now I get a new chapter in your fic too!!!!!!!!!! Yay! Rawr! What a little incubus young Sevie is! How can he be so unknowledgeable when he's so proficient (wink wink). Once again, love their interaction. Hermione's inner dialogue is quite amusing considering the situation she's in when she's having it. I certainly couldn't be having an mental diatribe while he was providing such bliss. She's cinlyinly talented. Hope for the next chapter soon! Thanks again for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 05, 2004
    Oh my! What's going to happen next? I look forward to finding out. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on June 05, 2004
    Glad you're back & hoour our business trip was enjoyable!!! Before the review I just wanted to say something about the response you wrote to me below... I am sorry to hear that you lost readers, BUT I am glad that you have stuck to your story, the way that you want to write it!!! I feel that one of the most important things in writing is to stay true to yourself as far as where you want your story to go!!!

    Chapter 8... I find this chapter to be quite interesting!!! This is a nice look into the way that both of these characters are feeling & thinking as well as them learning a bit about each other & themselves!!! I am looking forward to part 2 of this to see what they will do & how much more they will learn of each other!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Skiving Snackboxes on June 03, 2004
    EXCELLENT!! I really like that Hermione is older than Severus; I've never seen any other do that and I'm surprised at how well it works or rather how well you've made it work. Even though he's young and inexperienced I'm still fluttering... And And now I'm thinking about that last scene again, please update! I'm begging you!!
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  • From ANON - Persia on April 29, 2004
    Eek! I so love young Sev! He is so dark and broody, yet young and unsure! Such a good mix! Didnt' say he "only" wanted to see her breasts indeed, cocky little bastard! Excellent chapter, as well as the ones preceeding it. I hadn't been to check to see if you had updated in a while and I had several chapters to read, which was nice. Hope you update soon, that was a wicked cliffie you left us with!
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  • From ANON - Greenstuff on April 28, 2004
    *cackles evily* That was a wonderful chapter. The battle for control was very insteresting - well written and really IC.
    Please WMS. This story is soo gooood!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Stump on April 25, 2004
    Now it's starting to get good. There's something so fun about sex games (when you read them), the power play, who will dominate, who will control? Now if *I* were Hermione, I would step closer and move his mouth to my nipple. Like a babe at breast, under her control. YUM! Will Severus give all reason over to his "dumbstick"? Hope so. How did that song long ago go? Oh yeah, "Teach me, tonight." Teach, baby, teach! MORE!!!
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