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Reviews for The art of Potion Making

By : philodoxfianna
  • From HeartStar on October 22, 2009
    Hello I was wondering if you were still writing this love it so far and I wanted to see some more please thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2005
    gonna say this one more time...I hate when people don't finish a story....and it's even worse when it's a good story.


    ~Lightningbook
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  • From ANON - crudedly on March 02, 2004
    You should put the OOC warning in the beginning of the story. for a moment i really thought about just writing that and then go to bed, but no, you'll have to read the whole i-don't-like-your-story-thing, too. Sorry, i am really. It's just that they wouldn't act that way, neither of them. Of course, we can just pretend that we are not JKR and we will never get them in Character, but Snape doesn't sto bto be that type of guy who just says: "Please, i'm getting tired of Prof. or Sir, call me Severus." He wouldn't just be sitting there in yeans, either, though the image is a rather nice one. Then, i think, that Harry wouldn't tell him straight forward that Snape makes him nervous. Believe me, to tell this a teacher is an extremely embarrassing thing, and if said teacher was an ass to you the last 4/5/6 years, you wouldn't, too. That's just my opinion of that, and why ever Snape chose to be so friendly is a mystery. There are some repeated words in your story, like the word 'jaded' (eyes), and it wouldn't be obvious to you, because it's in the next chapter, but your chapters are very short, and if you read them in a row, it becomes clear. Generally i think it's difficult to read, i can't quite figure out why, but i guess it's because a lot of sentences begin with 'Harry, Snape, Ron, .. He, he, he, he..." you know what i mean.
    I hope i could be a bit of a help, ot iot i wasted my time, and i don't care either.
    crudedly
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  • From ANON - REW on March 01, 2004
    Love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2004
    hey in case no one said already, that song "suicide is painless" was by marylin manson
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  • From ANON - Fanged Angel on February 25, 2004
    Well,how about Snape starts realizing that he feels something for Harry when they start their lessons.Of course,Harry should also have the Revelation.It's all up to you but please update fast I really like this fic.
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  • From ANON - Anvanimaserke on February 25, 2004
    GGGAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thay was mean!!! I wanted a lemon!!! GGRRRR!!!! IF YOU DONT UPDATE SOON I'LL KILL YOU!!!!! (i get crazy when i like the style of writting, this is good, you need to finish it!)
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