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Reviews for One Lucky Man

By : missusj
  • From illnevertell on February 11, 2007
    Is there a huge chunk of this story missing or is it supposed to go from nothing to the ending without telling the reader how they got there? I'm completely confused.
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  • From ANON - whiteshadow on November 22, 2006
    Missing part of the middle of the story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2006
    there seems to be a part missing...
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  • From ANON - whatareyouevensaying on July 28, 2006
    Um...it kinda jumps from the conversation to the smut. Looks like some kind of error?
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  • From ANON - Dorian on July 17, 2006
    Not bad at all.. the text seems to have gotten a buggy at the middle, tho.
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  • From ANON - The Resident on August 13, 2005
    This isnot a complete story. A large chunk in the middle is missing. Can you either provide me with the 'complete' story or let me know where I can find it?
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  • From ANON - confused on January 11, 2005
    There seems to be a large chunk missing in the middle of this story. a paragraph begins with Hermione or Tonks saying something to Harry, then in mid-sentence, switches to Harry feeling Tonks' tits while Hermione gives him a blow job. What caused this discrepancy? Please fix it.
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  • From ANON - Muddgutts on October 24, 2004
    Hi, I just wanted to say this was a great little fic. I do believe it was one of my drawings of H/Hr/T that may have set Nappa off. Here have a look: http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/alonetogether_HHRT.jpg
    Of course mine is a bit different, but thats ok. thats for a good read.

    Muddgutts
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  • From ANON - shinyquarter on February 25, 2004
    wow, Harry needs to loosen up! The best part, I thought, wasn't even in the story proper: it was the image of Tonks as Haruka, I loved it! Good imaging skills. Next time, though, I think a little more enthusiasm for kink on the male part is needed.
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