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Reviews for A Dish Served Cold

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on April 28, 2005
    One of the best out there. You have true talent, keep writing for us mere mortals.
    Much Love,
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2005
    At last an update! Good, I liked how worried Hermione was and how "normal" the Death Eater meeting turned out to be!

    Just a little thing though, what kind of primary school must Hermione have gone to to sit on a council?!! OMG, a bunch of ten year olds (and younger?!) deciding stuff in between wetting themselves and having hissy fits because they want to go out and play. Remember that at eleven Hermione was much more mature than others her age. No primary school would have a council with pupils on it, not even Hermione. Sorry, but I don't buy it. I would believe she'd heard her parents talk about neighbourhood watch or Rotary meetings or something though.
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 28, 2005
    I wondered if this story was on hold. Welcome back! Good chapter. Nice for Dora, too. Percy was the last one I'd pick for her, but I'm willing to cheer for them.
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on April 11, 2005
    Oh pretty please can we have more? I love this fic.

    Good on Hermione for trying to change Severus' shampoo, I think a nice camomile scent would work wonders.
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  • From ANON - ql on March 28, 2005
    OMG! OMG! OMG! There going to use the soulmate spell! There going to use the soulmate spell! I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on March 26, 2005
    It seems like its been forever sense you've updated this....or is it just me? Keep going! Its one of the best out there!
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - wakhiza on March 25, 2005
    I am SO loving this story, I just can't tell you how much. Please write more, threaten the plot bunny if you have to, but write more, SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Ishka on March 24, 2005
    pls update, I woulld love to read more story.
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 24, 2005
    And in your defense concerning divine angel's complaint about the married students' names, consider what sort of society would force teenage girls to marry someone not of their choosing? The story is faithful to logic, in that women are second-class and subjugated. Retaining the identity of their maiden names is the last thing such an overbearing Pureblood population would want. Whether we like it or not. (Me, I'm a Mrs. and proud. Of course I had a hideous maiden name, and a fantastic husband, who honors me above all things. But then, I'm luckier than most.)
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 24, 2005
    Well, thank the Muse that finally got of her can and inspired another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Demosthenes on March 23, 2005
    another great chapter, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - divine angel (not logged in) on March 23, 2005
    I only just discovered this story and I lurrrrrrrrv it! I read quite a few marriage challenge fics and this one is so different. I only just finished chapter 6, I don't normally review until the end, but I just had to let you know how great it is!

    I have one small niggle, just a small one: I know the Wizarding world has slightly, erm, historical elements (writing with quills, blah blah) but why can't the married female students keep their names, at school at least? Why don't the teachers refer to the students as Ms such n such? Avoid the horrid Mrs word! "Mrs. Severus Snape" made me cringe horribly. (Sorry, raging feminist here, married with own name, been Ms since was thirteen!)

    Love the teachers talking about provisions for children etc, wonderful. Love, love, love Snape's mental image of Millicent Bullstrode and himself! Everyone is in canon too, you're a very good writer.
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on March 23, 2005
    Yay! An Update!

    I always look forward to updates to this story because you have such intriguing twists to offer. You've matched the characters most interestingly, and each one is a fantastic match. I'm now wondering about Draco's match - is he doomed to remain single? Or will his intended be someone who can change him, even for a little while? Embarassment aside, Draco is certainly not that stupid - he would figure out that looks and wealth are not the only two criteria for marriage, wouldn't he?

    I'm looking forward to more updates for this fic.
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  • From ANON - June on March 23, 2005
    Ch 21 - wow, you covered almost everyone in this chapter, whetting our thirst just a little but not enough. I think I'm most worried about what Lucius is up to, then what Sarit Yidoni has planned. Hopefully, Hermione and the spying grandchild can figure out the figurine and un-charm it. As for Tonks and the Weasley Christmas - that's part of every newlywed couple's adjustment period, but I do feel sad that she is wed to Percy the Prat, with Ubermom Molly as her MIL. Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Eddie on February 17, 2005
    Oh my God, I love you!! Fricking GENUIS in the house, yall! I just about died laughing at Nevile when he fainted after reading Helenia's name....I'm sorry, I'm going back to the story not. Its positively top notch love. much love, Eddie the Black Maru
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