Click Here!

Reviews for A Dish Served Cold

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - droxy on July 17, 2005
    Ahha! I found it here. I am just too impatient. I see the imagery muse is alive and well! Such great, crisp descriptions of emitons and place.

    Love teh Dumbdore proposal, with lots of mystery.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - llandorian on July 15, 2005
    I followed the your story from the first chapter and now I finally decided to review (sorry for taking so long).
    First of all: great fic. I'm totally into marriage- fiction but your story is one of the vip stuff.
    So there are two things to coment on. First: the Bloody Baron thing- a real cliffy. Never read that before, like involing the Baron. I wonder what the background it is. Second: What's the thing about D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angel on July 15, 2005
    i love it i hope the rivening works i would love to see lupn and ginny have a happy ever after and he can go to her games and i hope all works out well for the rest of the gang i cant wait in till you update next i just love this story ........... so in till next time later and i hope you update soon and than you

    angel
    Report Review

  • From ANON - azulkan2 on July 14, 2005
    Now there were some really interesting twists to this chapter. Looking forward to the next part.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chiko on July 13, 2005
    In response to the fact that they lowered the marrying age to 16 and ginny ust turned 16 she doesnt have to worry abut the law because Ginny is pureblood. which is why ron wants to marry that one girl or whatever. he wantas to help her.and please edit your work better.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chiko on July 13, 2005
    I like your story. I was wondering about snape's dads name. Does it have a meaning or something? i separated it into sections. ta-lie-sin which could be thought into to lie or sin anyways good stry.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kari on July 11, 2005
    well, the end of that chapter left me completely flummoxed. i was so involved in following the other pairings that i didn't notice the signs of this one coming. i am enjoying the story very much. i am still not sure what is going on the malfoy sr and the seer plot are connected yet but will defnitely keep reading. will keep reading the chapters as they are posted but am looking forward to the betaed versions too as the typos are a bit distracting. eagerly awaiting the next chapter. pretty addictive story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jo on July 11, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story. Good pace and variety. My only problem is that there seems to be a chapter missing -- Chapter 13: Snape/Granger Reception. Things happened there that were referenced further on in the story but I never read it. Look forward to more ... Thanks

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aoluas on July 11, 2005
    Riht splendid, this is, and we can't wait for you to continue. One thing though - the Latin of your marriage spell is off. I (Jisen of Aoluas Anminti) take Latin, so I thought I might make a suggestion. If I'm being a pest, just tell me. I had a few ideas: Matrimonium optimum legeo (I choose the best marriage), Matrimonium optimum seligo (I select the best marriage), and Virum optimum seligo [or elegeo, or legeo] (I select (or elect, or choose) the best man). The reason maritus optimus selectus (did I remember that right?) is wrong is because maritus and optimus aren't in the right case, and selectus is the perfect principle part of the verb (I think it's passive, too, but I'm not checking my Latin notes as I write). Anyways, the translation as you had it originally would have been "the best marriage I have been selected," which doesn't make much sense. If it's not the past passive it would have been "the best marriage I selected," which passes in English but is still wrong grammatically in Latin because "best marriage" is the subject as you had it, and it should be the direct object -- off on a tangent, sorry.
    Anyways, I really do love the story and I think everyone is portrayed beautifully. You can consider my Latin suggestions or you can let me know exactly where I can shove them. Please tell me if I'm being a pest.
    By the way, we (all of Aoluas again) would welcome becoming your (temporary?) beta while your other one is away. Think of us as your beta-beta while your alpha-beta is away, ne? Keep writing - this site needs all of the skillful stories it can get. We're a bit tired of immature prepubescents writing lemons with descriptions straight out of bad romance novels and characters altered beyond recognition to suit an impossible, illogical plot. That is to say, so far as we're concerned, you rock, and not merely by comparison, either. Ahh, we've yabbered enough. Ciao. Write on.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angel on July 10, 2005
    omg that was great i cant wait in till you update next i jut love this story soooooooooooooooooooo please update sooon i just have to know what will happen next and how snape will act when he finds out that he could be a seer and that Sabine Snape and Albus Dumbledore had put a restraints on his 'gift'...... please update soon well in till next time later

    angel
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Andartha on July 05, 2005
    I still keep reading this and I'm still enjoying it. Very much so. Just thought I'd let you know : )
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on July 04, 2005
    YEAY! update!!!! Can't wait to hear more! Keep going this is a fantastic story. :) xXx
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tamy on July 04, 2005
    That was really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good. Write more, or I shall become angry. I'M A FANGIRL ON THE EDGE!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tamargrl on July 01, 2005
    As usual, I finish reading your chapters and am filled with the dueling sentiments of awe and jealousy at your writing ability. Manipulation is fantasic when written well and you have a gift for it. You've also got quite the fantastic imagination, but that comes as no surprise, given the other works of yours I've read.

    One question, my Hebrew is rusty, but isn't 'B'vakashah' 'please'?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angel on June 30, 2005
    that was a great chapter i cant wait in till you update it .... i need to know what harry wants snape to do and how thing will turn out for snape and hermione soooooooooo please i beg of you update sooon i just love how this story is coming along and thank you for all the chapter you have giving us so far i hope to read the nex chapter every every every sooon well bye for now

    angel
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!