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Reviews for \'Fay\' - The Fairy Queen

By : LadyofAvalon
  • From Faithfulrain on April 12, 2004
    Ok just read chappie 1: like this story, and I hardly ever like a stroy. I don't love it, but I might. You're OC is quite interesting, she's not a typical one is she? I like 'em a little bitchy ei? :D Your Draco seems quite my type as well.

    You have a few spelling mistakes (yes righ listen to the expert:D), I just found out today that MRS is spelt missus so I don't know ght ght be wrong, buma pma pretty sure that BEAR is how you spell Bear....:D you know teddybear man, it just buggs me the way you spell it. Also at some point you make Fay talk in first person, it;s confusing, one senance it's "I SAID" and then it's "SHE SOMETHING" ... you know what I mean. This you're just missing your proof reading. :D:D:D

    Now I really want to know why Fay lost her memory.... really excited:D:D:D great start, and it's quite wickeat sat she's in Slytherin. Anyway off to read more.... I hope there is more, if there isn't then UPADATE SOON. and keep up, hugs Faithful:D
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  • From ANON - alex on April 12, 2004
    Nur um duch zu
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