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Reviews for Breaking Down the Walls

By : AuroraC
  • From RickyRoo on December 08, 1919
    This story is quite well done. A little bit of broken imagery, but that comes with time and practice. I hope to see you keep writing!!! I'm always up for a juicey Snape fic. :)

    ~Lara
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  • From ANON - Alice on August 28, 2003
    Oh, please don't tell me you've stopped writing?!
    I did enjoy this story very much so far, and just can't believe you leave us hanging here, without telling us, what exactly an "Untouchable" is.

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  • From ANON - Kim on August 02, 2003
    I just read your story today. I've been working through a list of Snape romance fanfics and yours is one of the best I've read. I was very taken in by the story and will anxiously await more (though it looks like you haven't added any for quite some time--I do hope you'll finish). Your original character of Aurora is very strong; I like her. I like the mystery you've built up around her--the "untouchable;" and the fact that she is Dumbledore's granddaughter, but Snape doesn't know--delightful!

    Another strong point of your story is the reality you give to Harry/Ron/Hermione. Most of the Snape/OC stories I've read have splashes of the trio (or Harry only) that just don't ring true, but your glimpses into their existence in your storyline are very in keeping with how JKR writes them and that makes your story seem all the more plausible and enjoyable.

    I also liked the secret school for training against evil wizards and the underground ministry operating without Fudge's knowledge.

    Now, just because OOtP has been released and puts your story into a somewhat altered universe doesn't mean that those of us following it aren't still interested in your ideas : ). So please write some more!!!

    One last thing, being the Snape fan that I am, I truly loved your image of him in a white pirate shirt! Oo la la!!

    Thank you for your story.

    Kim (first time reviewer anywhere, your pleas got to me)

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2003
    i loved it!.... you have me hooked i cant wait to see what happens next!
    ~Ky
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  • From ANON - Alice on July 06, 2003
    Please, please update this brilliant story! I can't stand waiting anngernger!
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 30, 2003
    I have reviewed! Think it is great keeping checking for updates. Please update, Thanks Kim
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  • From ANON - Frini on March 19, 2003
    UPDATE WOMAN!!!!
    Love
    Frini
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  • From ANON - Winky on March 13, 2003
    I have been enjoying this story very much. I assume it is going to be much longer eventually, because you have a developed a very large arc for your characters to follow. I look forward to seeing how it all turns out.

    By way of constructive criticism, I would just suggest that you ediur cur chapters a little more carefully. There were tiny mistakes here and there that a thorough review on your part (or a beta) should catch. Also, when "its" is possessive, there is no apostrophe. When it's a contraction of "it is," then there is an apostrophe. Also, the British only use "pants" to mean underwear. Use "trousers" instead.

    The story you've created is very imaginative, and your original character is quite worthy of Snape and the rest of Rowling's crew. I wonder if Snape is ever going to relax and trust Aurora, or if their relationship will always be that hostile (which wouldn't be very romantic). I'm not that keen on his trying to ravage her as a control/power struggle thing, and once you go down that road, it would be hard for him to redeem himself. So I'm curious what your plans are for their future relationship.

    I'm glad you didn't turn Snape into just some big, loveable, misunderstood mush. I like him having an edge, although he's a tad more volatile than I would have expected. When he had Aurora pinned to the tree, I was torn between wanting her to knock him on his butt and wanting them to get on with it (I don't usually read this site for the plots!).

    Feel free to e-mail me to discuss what I've said or just to tell me when you've posted another chapter.

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Frini on February 18, 2003
    Hey you!
    I started reading your fic at my website www.rebelwithoutabroom.kit.net but then something happened to it and we can't seem to fix it. Anyway, I followed you here and I have to say I can't get enough of your story. Update soon and, if you can, please let me know when you post a chapter.

    Love
    Frini
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 12, 2003
    So just what is an Untouchable? Sounds very mysterious, powerful and fascinating. Great story. Snape is perfectly nasty and sexy and Aurura is no Mary Sue. Wow! I can't wait until they get it on for real. Please continue, because this is a very interesting story, and I can't wait to see how Aurora insinuates herself into Snape's spying activities.
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 12, 2003
    Help, where are updates? Please don't tell me you are not going to finish. This is a great story and you are doing wonderfully. I love your story line and characters. Please Please update. I am sorry I have not reviewed before to tell you I am sure there are others who read and don't review. We'll have to get after them. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - kim on February 04, 2003
    HI, great story and chapter. Looking for update. Hope you are going to keep writting.

    Thanks,
    KIM
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  • From ANON - lipita on January 17, 2003
    This is very, very good. I love Aurora, and your Snape. Your writing is also impressive: the words seem to flow so easily. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 17, 2003
    Think it very good. Looking for an update. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 14, 2003
    Just finished the last chapter, very good. Now you have left us hanging out here you have to finish it, give us more! Very interesting story, not the run of the mill and taking your time for the sex. Thanks,

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