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Reviews for Beneath the Surface

By : Sharkdiver
  • From ANON - illnevertell on April 27, 2004

    My oh my! The possibilites are just swimming around in my mind. This is going to just get better and better! I am hooked now I cant wait to read more so please dont torture me. Update ASAP !!! I LOVE when Hermione was drunk and said " Your place or mine ? " to Severus. I can just imagine the look on his face! It gave me quite a chuckle to think of Severus Snape being shocked and speechless!!! I love where this is going. I also got a little teary at Ron asking Harry if the Weasleys could adopt him officially. I must admit that has been something I have wanted to happen since the end of " Goblet of Fire " when Mrs Weasley hugged him and he cried into her shoulder after he returned with Cedric Diggory's body. I am really looking forward to reading more. * kudos * You are doing a great job!

    ~ Jaimie ~
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 18, 2004
    Interesting, thanks.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 14, 2004
    I almost forgot I was reading this. I'm glad you updated for us. So, Hermione and Severus staying in the same cottage for the summer? They are also attracted to each other? Sounds like a potentially lemony situation. Please don't keep us waiting too long. Thanks foe woe wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - mele on March 23, 2004
    ooooo! now it's getting juicy! can't wait for more! hurry and update! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Leia1912 on March 18, 2004
    You know, I was looking at the latest fics here today, glanced at the title, and thought, "Hmmm, must've read a bit of this earlier--title is familiar." So I started reading the 4th chapter, thinking, "God, this is good!" and then it hit me--"Shark's fic! This is Shark's fic!" So there you have it: even before I knew it was by you, I knew it was "darned" good. ("Darned" in honor of the prudes on certain other fic networks...) I think you do an excellent job with Snape here--delicious mix of snark, sneer, shyness and a certain mmmmmrowr sex appeal--and your Hermione is very believable. (God, if I'd have made a drunken pass at some of my teacher crushes--*shudders with horror for Hermione's morning-after memories*) The scene exit--touching her cheek and leaving--creates a wonderful sense of tension between the two. I look forward to more!
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  • From slygriff21 on March 18, 2004
    Great story so far. Please update again soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Rinkelbel on March 03, 2004
    A very, very nice story!! Please continie writing it, because I'm very curious about the rest of the story!
    Sweets

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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 03, 2004
    Fun chapter. I can only image the sloppy kiss Hermione gave Severus. No one that drunk kisses well. I feel bad for Hermione. Sounded like a vicious hangover.
    Write more soon.
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - PaganPoetry on March 01, 2004
    Interesting start, it'd be good if you could make the chapters a bit longer but i'll watch out for more.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on March 01, 2004
    Great start to a good story. I'm intrigued by this one, so I hope to read more of it soon. You did a good job setting up the characterization for this story and I didn't see any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors. So you're good to go!

    Ciao!
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