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Reviews for Breeding Lilacs out of Dead Land.

By : mbassan
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 10, 2004
    Chapter 5... Another AMAZING chapter, full of information!!! A lot of interesting information on Severus' past, his family & what he did to Hermione!!!

    I really like how you wrote the conversation between Severus & Hermione!!! I am glad to hear that he remembers & does feel guilt (even if he won't let her see it)!!! I think she is probably one of the few people that is capable of knocking him down a peg or 2 with reality!!! If he didn't feel any real remorse he wouldn't have felt the need to throw up after she left!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing how much Aubrey will have an affect on Severus & just how long it will take him to see just what CAN be!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 10, 2004
    Geez, that was rough. At least he knows now. Hermione was very brave and unbelievably controlled in telling him. Her strength was admirable. I look forward to Aubrey's take on this. She won't take his garbage and I look forward to it.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on March 10, 2004
    Just to clarify that last comment, your writing is beautiful and you are weaving an amazing story -- the subject matter and emotions make it difficult to call the story "beautiful;" it's moving, deep and wonderfully evocative. Beautiful dar dark way might be the better way to say it.
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  • From ANON - IrishRai on March 09, 2004
    I wonder, will Severus launch into a furious tirade when he learns he's Aubrey's father? He'd get a scolding from Aubrey for sure, if he did that...hehe. Sorry, my mind is wandering. I meant to start off by saying 'wonderful chapter' and 'I hope to see more updates soon'. Ciao.
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  • From ANON - YesPlease on March 09, 2004
    Write! You must write more! Stop reading this at once and write! This is brilliant story. I can hardly wait to see where it goes
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 09, 2004
    interesting four chapters, rape is such a horrible thing and concieving and keeping the child seem a little implausible yet honourable. you have my attention. thanks.
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on March 09, 2004
    This story is really interesting, I like the whole idea, but have difficult picturing a forgiving Hermione. Once I new a woman who recived a gunshot, she says she needs to forgive. Forgiveness is an act of will, after all but working with the rapier? Well, I'm waiting to see what would you do with all this. Good fic!
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  • From ANON - Rumours on March 09, 2004
    Goodness gracious. I can't wait for more, and hope you're going to finish it and not keep us in angst for long between chapters!!!!!

    I love the rottweiler comment. ;)

    ~ R
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  • From ANON - Rumours on March 09, 2004
    WOW. Well, you certainly surprised ME.

    DAMN.
    nwarnwards ...
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  • From ANON - Red on March 09, 2004
    you know, I love SS/HG stories and think they are the best, but I have a feeling this story will have Hermione yelling all the time, trying to justify what she did....yes, rape is wrong, but this man has been without knowledge of a child he helped create for 9 years...how would Hermione feel if the shoe was on the other foot? If Severus took the child away for the next 9 years? Sometimes I think that would be justified...and the only reason she came back now is because she needs something.
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 09, 2004
    This is terribly, terribly beautiful, and I think I may just be addicted.
    I am still astonished that English is not your mother tongue! As for
    hair colour, both mine and the father of my children's hair are very
    dark brown, and we produced one white-blonde and one redhead.
    Odd, how genetics move. I'rsonrsonally enchanted that you have
    not given Hermione's and Snape's daughter the usual cinnamon or
    black hair. It works perfectly - an image of something pure
    coming from such a dark beginning. Many thanks for posting this
    amazing work on this site.

    Blessings, Kait x
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 09, 2004
    Part 4, Chapter 3... I am very taken by this story!!! Not only is it well written, but it keeps the readers attention!!! I do like how you are writing the characters, fitting the situation!!!

    I am glad to see that Hermione will be working with Severus, but something tells me that he won't be too thrilled!!! I am very much looking forward to seeing how he reacts to finding out that she will be taking over some of his classes!!! I'm even more interested in seeing what he does when he findt het he has a daughter & remembering the situation that created her!!!

    Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Rosmerta on March 08, 2004
    Wow, your English is terrific! I would never have guessed it's your second language, not your first. I enjoyed Aubrey's meeting Severus for the first time. I'm curious about the blonde hair - would that be a Granger trait, perhaps? Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on March 08, 2004
    A lovely title for what looks likely to be a dark and beautiful work of fiction.
    And, so far, what a story this is! Your English is faultless, and I am further
    impressed by your wonderful imagery and characterisation. I very much
    look forward to reading more, soon.

    Until then, Blessed Be.

    Kait
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  • From ANON - olka-polka on March 08, 2004
    Your story is beautiful...it's so intriguing. I like your Sev and Aubrey. Will be waiting for continuation. Thank you very much :)
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