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Reviews for Breeding Lilacs out of Dead Land.

By : mbassan
  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 10, 2004
    "Hello. My name is Aubrey Victoria Granger. You killed my father. Prepare to die!"

    Quite surrealistic in the context of your story, but it is a wonderful line.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on April 10, 2004
    OH MY GOODNESS! That was awful and wonderful at the same time! How the heck do you do that! I was thrilled that They finally got to Aubrey, but that Albus was killed was sooooooo sad! Poor poor Severus! How is he going to feel? Granted Albus was sick and old will he be able to handle that? Next chapter please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Virtual256 on April 10, 2004
    I just finished reading my way through BLOoDL, and I must say that it is quite well written.

    I found the story gripping enough that I read straight through, and was quite upset to know that it isn't done yet.

    Please, keep up the good work and, if possible, let me know when the next chapter gets posted.

    Vir
    Vir
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 10, 2004
    The Albus/Severus goodbye scene was sheer brilliance. I hope you don't mind, but I used part of it in a post at L&LS because it struck me, and indeed, put into words my feelings about my search for forgiveness as well. It's going to stick with me for a long time. I am just floored at how beautifully written it was.

    I hope too many people don't get upset by Hermione's desire to make love in the middle of everything. As a married woman, I can honestly say that at moments like that, yes, it helps.

    Heather
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  • From ANON - Lucy on April 09, 2004
    Chapter 24 was the vilest, most offensive text I have ever read. I was enjoying this story but it has now become nothing more than a platform for you to spout your religious, social and political beliefs. I truly hope you are recieving therapy as this story can only be the product of a deeply disturbed mind.
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  • From ANON - Gellar on April 09, 2004
    Surely it should be HERMIONE, not DUMBLEDORE, who has the right to absolve Severus for his evil acts in the past? I'm completely unimpressed and I wish I'd stopped reading this ages ago. I only pursued it because someone recced it to me. It's clear that they, and you, are insane misogynists.
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  • From ANON - Kim on April 08, 2004
    This is very very wrong. First, the parents draw out their daughter's severed finger, and then they're off having sex. I used to like this fic, but now I can see it for the disgusting exposition of retarded ideas that it is. You have officially gone beyond the pale. I will not be reading any more of this.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 08, 2004
    Chapter 23 - The Trial by Existence... This chapter has some very emotional stuff in it!!! What they have done to Aubrey is so very cruel & it brings tears because as a mother I would want those who hurt my child to pay!!! Severus has so many internal battles that he fights & now with what has happened to his daughter, another has been added not to mention another child yet to be born!!! The end just hit me so strongly, Ginny trying to comfort the child that has been put through so much, not really knowing if what she has told her is true, but trying to be convincing & hopeful!!!

    I am very much looking forward to the battle, to see what will happen to the very diverse group of fighters as well as to see if they will find Ginny & Aubrey!!! Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - amoureux on April 08, 2004
    "Only because of greegree in counseling social work and being a licensed psychotherapist"

    My Goodness, please tell me that someone with such a degree as yours surely doesn't treat patients as such. Cruelity and Rudeness should be above someone of your intelligence. If you don't like it, don't read it. Don't bother reviewing because whereas not everyone has to like the story, no one has to be rude to someone writing it.

    And for the other person about the child be taken and their reaction.. That could be real. I know someone who's child was kidnapped and their greif was so strong that they stuck to the only real thing they could feel. sex. Yes, she ended up pregnant again within 4 months of her child's disappearance. One month before the child was born, the body turned up. it was a horrible, devistating thing and i feel for her with all my heart. She named her new girl the exact name as the first.

    keep writing. its beautiful
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  • From ANON - LadyAnneSnape on April 08, 2004
    I missed the direction in which you're now taking this story. I can't help but feel that Aubrey
    was only taken for the purpose of a shock to the readers *And quite brutally so*, and the purpose
    left me feeling cold. Especially the way that Severus and Hermione are dealing with losing their only child.
    Why are they having sex so much and haven't tried looking for her? At all? It leaves me with the sense they could
    care less at what happens to her. Now they have the new child on the way, and having sex again, that they're
    not going to try and find their only child, any time soon.

    I can't help but feel that you've only decided to rip-off war telling now, because you have no idea what e
    to
    to do with the direction of the story to make it continue.

    It's a cheap thing to do.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 08, 2004
    I'm more scared now - lot of controversy surrounding your story. you must be proud to inspire reaction for a fan fic. thanks.
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  • From ANON - jeslyn_nighthawk on April 08, 2004
    WOW. Just wow.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 07, 2004
    Chapter 22
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  • From ANON - Candace on April 07, 2004
    Good as always!! :D

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  • From ANON - AnglicWitch on April 07, 2004
    Hi, i've been a huge lurker, who usually doesn't come out to say anything. period. But i feel that the discussion at WIKTT has blown out of complete proportions and that you deserve way more support than the stuff that has come out over there. You write beautifully, and portray Hermione realistically (rather than some perfect goddess) and Snape having that affair seems like something he would do in comparison to the "i think i'm ugly i don't deserve anybody why would you want me" fanon severus snape. Though I am not a survivor, i feel that i may understand the need for forgiveness for Snape.

    Anyway, if i could keep talking about your fic i would, but i can't due to classes, but I applaud you on your writing and am very excited to read what happens next.

    -AnglicWitch
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