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Reviews for Breeding Lilacs out of Dead Land.

By : mbassan
  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 05, 2004
    typos or not...its brilliant. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 04, 2004
    Chapter 22... I am very much enjoying watching this relationship grow!!! Severus has changed a good deal, in a good way!!! I am glad that he cares for them as much as he does!!!

    I really like the things she said at Remus' grave!!! Really makes you think!!! Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Candace on April 04, 2004
    Good Chapter...Kind of short....but good. I, personally, do not care much about typos...but that is just me. Keep up the good work, and hurry up with the next chapter!!!:P
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on April 04, 2004
    Bitch, bitch, bitch! That's all some people ever do! Yes, I noticed the errors, so what! We are all human and make mistakes. Get to the editing when it's good for you! ;c) I'm happy w/ the frequent updates. You're the author, whatever you like I'm w/ you!

    Now about this chapter! LOVED IT! Love how Aubrey, Snape, and Hermione have almost become a whole family. I love how Snape is adjusting the best he can to the situation. I love how Hermione and Aubrey were sensitive to Snape's feelings about Easter. As a Christian I am pleased that she wasn't portrayed as someone shoving her faith down his throat. I thought that was nice.

    This story is so dark, but at the same time parts of it feel like there is a lightness that may just peak through for the characters involved. Hope so!
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  • From ANON - chibidaima on April 04, 2004
    so beautiful... but the end of the chapter was a bit sad.... I loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - Jules on April 04, 2004
    Absolutely loving this story - please do not stop!!!
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  • From ANON - amy on April 03, 2004
    PLEASE HURRY AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! plEEEAAAAAAASSSEE
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  • From ANON - Amoureux De Sang on April 03, 2004
    Thank you for yet another beautiful chapter. i check it everyday after i get home from work. a million thank yous.
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  • From ANON - Mercurial on April 03, 2004
    Fabulous. That was a truly delicious scene, at the end. And with Anna...! Thank you. I hope there's more yet.

    ~ Jenna.
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  • From ANON - Candace on April 03, 2004
    Omg this is so good! When's the next chapter? I can't Wait!!!
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  • From ANON - Shannon on April 03, 2004
    Your story has a great plotline, and is written well, though you could use a little help in the proofreading department. I understand that English is not your first language, so I give you credit for how well you have been doing. I would be happy to proofread for you, if you would . I . I am currently proofreading for another HG/SS fanficker named Jan McNeville (see her work on www.fanfiction.net). I can be found online after 9pm on AOL Instant Messenger (theatrekitten) or MSN Messenger (theatrebutterfly@hotmail.com).

    Shannon
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  • From ANON - Krista on April 02, 2004
    I started reading this ages ago, and bookmarked it, and finally got to the last chapter tonight. I can tell you, I've really been enjoying it! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 02, 2004
    Chapter 21... I think that what Aubrey said was adorable, "I don't think Severus will be happy that you're dating some other guy." Choldren can see things that adults overlook!!!

    I really like the way that you have Severus & Hermione end up sharing each other!!! The massage & conversation that made its way to more!!! They were both very honest in what they wanted or thought that they could allow!!! You did a FABULOUS job of writing their sharing & told so much without gowing into a lot of graphic detail!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing how things between them go now that they have taken the step beyond friendship!!! Til chapter 22, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on April 02, 2004
    Wow that was something! I wonder what will happen between them now. Does this mean that Severus wants to be more to Hermione and Aubrey? Little Aubrey kills me! I can just picture the little genius alluding to sex between Hermione & Snape the way she was and Hermioeingeing taken off guard and a bit upset about what that kid might or might not have found out! LOL! She's too much! LOVE that kid!
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  • From ANON - Bella Ireland on April 02, 2004
    YEAH!!!!!!!!!!! We finally get some lovin'!!!!! As happy as I am to see it, it also scares me about what is to come. Excellent chapter. I loved the dialogue, once again.

    Bella Ireland
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