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By : Sim
  • From ANON - calicat on March 09, 2004
    Definatly interesting. I see you are making a point to slowly show us why certian things are happening. Thank you for that, but more is needed. There is only one thing that really bothers me, aside from thet tht that D/HR ships are not usually my thing, is why, if Draco loved Hermione so much, why would he put everything aside and marry Ginny, then try to degrade Hermione by making her his mistriss. I would think that Draco would have to have a VERY strong reason for that, and in my opinion it can't be just that Gin was pregnant by his father and he wanted to help her. I know it is your story, just trying to tell you what I think. Looking forward to the next chap.
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  • From ANON - deedee on March 09, 2004
    I guess this partial flashback kind of explains why Lucius is not with Ginny. He probably just wanted the affair and then took off when he found out she was pregnant, right? If that is the reason, why did Ginny still want to keep the baby? Did she really want to keep the baby? And what happened to Draco and Hermione? Please write more:)
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  • From ANON - deedee on March 07, 2004
    I guess this chapter did clear somethings up, but I think I need the flashbacks. Why would Ginny not understand about Draco and Hermione's relationship? I mean it's not like Ginny and Draco married for love. Why would Draco be willing to lose the love of his life in order to marry Ginny? Please update soon:)
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on March 06, 2004
    Your story sounds like it could be very good but it is very confusing. I mean I can understand you not wanting to give away the plot too soon and all but there doesn't seem to be a plot. Its all just a series of very confusing conversations. Unless you at least try to explain what the hell is happening your going to have a bunch of confused people who are just going to get tired of trying to figure it out and give up on the story.
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  • From ANON - Hermione Must Die on March 06, 2004
    I am SO very very happy that JKR shot down the Hermione/Draco ship during her chat on Friday! They are just ridiculous. I especially hate it when Ginny's used as an irritating obsticle keeping Hermione and Draco apart.
    Anyway... there's consolation in knowing that that is one ship that's dead dead dead! YAY!
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  • From ANON - May Bird on March 06, 2004
    Why can't Hermione bth Dth Draco???!!! it's not fair and i think Draco should leave Ginny
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  • From ANON - deedee on March 06, 2004
    Okay, I'm totally confused. Who are the babies' fathers? Why did Ginny marry Draco? And is Hermione having an affair with Draco? If this is all Lucius' fault, e ise is he? Update soon:)
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  • From ANON - Amy on March 06, 2004
    Hey, this is a really good start to a story! I wanna know now whats going on, what happened to Hermione/ her baby, and who Draco will end up with! Keep writing, great job!!!
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  • From ANON - jeannette on March 05, 2004
    i really like your story,when is malfoy sr.going to make an appeae?wie?will the chapters be longer?it really is a great beginning.
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  • From ANON - calicat on March 05, 2004
    umm... is it just me or is anyone esle confused. Unless the point of this story is to keep us guessing I suggest you write a chapter to explain what is going on here. While I am very intriged, I am also very confused about what is going on in this story. Don't get me wrong, it is not bad, and you have definatly caught my attention with this, I just don't get what is going on yet. If you are trying to keep us on our toes, then I have to admit you are doing a gjob.job. I look forward to the next chap.
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