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By : h0lden
  • From ANON - mele on March 26, 2004
    arrggghh! you are evil! who is he? what a cliff hanger! i can't even guess! hurry up and update! aloha, mele
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  • From nesscafe on March 26, 2004
    AAAAAHHH! No! You can't leave it there! Who is it!?! Is it Ron?! Is it Draco?! Who!? OH please update now! I need to know who it is!
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  • From ANON - Heather on March 26, 2004
    OMG. You have perfected the art of the evil cliff hanger. Congrats! :P Seriouesly, great chapter, the adventure scenes flowed beautifully, and I read it at the pace of th eaction, just wanting to kwho who the deatheater was. Great chapter!

    Heather

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  • From ANON - J.S.Sumner on March 21, 2004
    Hey there! I found this story a few days ago, and have been eagerly waiting for updates. Of course, you had to end the last chapter with a cliffhanger! ARGH! So far, this has been incredible. You have a certain knack for storytelling, as I found myself drinking in each chapter, always thirsting for more. Your characterization of Snape is very accurate. However, I do have a little spiff about Hermione--just a small ,tiny one at that. It has no affect on your story, but in the second chapter you said she was 18 years old, in her seventh year. But as I read through the chapters, I can't help but think of her more as 14. There have been several instances when her maturity level seemed a bit off course. At 18, she should be a little more worldly, and more adept to female/male interaction. She seems so innocent.... too innocent. Even if she is a virgin, her experience with the world should make her more acceptable and aware of common exchanges (stares, conversation, situations, ect.) Hermione has always been an intelligent character, seemingly above age.age. At 18, she should, in essence, be at about the same level as Snape. Perhaps even more confident to speak up and voice her opinion; not cower down, or be puzzled by common male/female occurances. Even her actions and thoughts seem a little childish and rash. Its hard to explain it, but I just can't picture her as anything above 14 years old, which makes her union with Snape just a little wierd for me. I don't know. But I really love this story, your descriptions and ideas are fresh and enjoyable; you are a supurb writer. And don't mind my comment about Hermione, it is just my personal opinion--no flame intended. It has just been on my mind for a while. If you are young yourself, than I can certainly understand why Hermione acts this way; we tend to thread in our own experiences with our characters. Anyways, please continue. The overall idea and feel of this story is brilliant. And I can't wait till your next update. Is Snape going to save her, or is going to push her back inside to uphold his role as deatheater? Hmmmm......
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  • From ANON - XChick03 on March 20, 2004
    This story rocks...but where's the rest of it?
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  • From ANON - Heather on March 16, 2004
    OMG! *gasp* Holy crap! *stunned*....brilliant twist!

    Heather
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 13, 2004
    Chapters 12 & 13 - oh my what's going to happen? thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 11, 2004
    Chapter 11, she's gonna get in trouble. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 11, 2004
    Yet another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - ehu on March 09, 2004
    just read this today..getting interesting! hope you update soon! this story is just too good to let go. i wonder when they're going to get together? hmm...*brain short circuits* never mind, i'll leave the plot weaving to the masters.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 09, 2004
    meany, meany, meany. thanks.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 08, 2004
    Ahhhhh! that was a pretty mean thing to do, hope she's okay. thanks.
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  • From ANON - mimi on March 08, 2004
    Best story ever--counting your other one of course. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 07, 2004
    This is really good. I love it! Keep it coming :-)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 07, 2004
    Poor Harry, thanks.
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