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Reviews for Little seed of evil

By : hereticangel
  • From Catium on March 19, 2007
    Ok I like this story it's diffrent but in a good way!
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  • From ANON - seto silk on February 02, 2006
    ........................................oh.....................................oh my....................................
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  • From ANON - kastra on October 30, 2005
    Very interesting story. I do like ones about Harry being all apathetic and dark. I do hope you decide to continue it if you have the inspiration.
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  • From ANON - kat on September 23, 2005
    I really like this fic. I hope you will continue it soon
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  • From on September 12, 2005
    Woah... this great. Harry reminds me of an onion with his many layers :P
    Can't wait for more, chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Nightwing on September 12, 2005
    ARG, i'm too lazy to sign in sorry. Hmm, great beginning i'm intrigued!!
    Can't wait to read more, chow for now!
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  • From ANON - War-chan on March 08, 2005
    This is, I must say, one of my more favord HP/SS as of far.It speeks many truths for the time of war, though in your story I feel no pity for Potter at all. Though he seems a little unblanced and that, for your Potter, is completely reasonable for as you wrote the deaths of his freinds that was a bad thought and for Potter you can just think and feel the horrable pain that must be going on inside his body. I love this fact that your story seemed to be able to suck me into the plot line so easly (and trust me I'm not one to be completely into a story so easly as only 11ch.s!) And now I MUST beg. PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!! I got a teast and now I want more! I do however have a request please once you get to the lemons can at LEST one of them be (in detail) Uke!Snape? Please there so hard to find not many people seem to be able to see Snape as a uke and Potter as a seme in this pairing, that is why I wish for you to do me this favor. Please. Thank You.

    Ja ne
    E-MailMeWhenYouUpdatePLEASE!
    Miss War-chan
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  • From ANON - raija on March 07, 2004
    This is definitely interesting and i wish that you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnali on March 07, 2004
    Interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Iwas going to read a couple of chapters and go go to bed. It's very late here. But The story sucked me in and I had to keep reading. Well Done. More would be very welcome. Don't stop now.
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  • From ANON - Princess of all that is Azkaban on March 06, 2004
    hey, I can't believe your fic it is amazing. Your writing style is really capturing and the plot and characters are truely amazing. Keep up the great work. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mykerinos on March 06, 2004
    So. I must admit that I am reviewing this mainly because I love proving people wrong. Quote: "Gah, they won't review. I have no confidence whatsoever." Hah! See! Here you've got one review, and it isn't even a review of a 12-year-old. I'm not sure what to say though. I recognise something of my own attitude in yours. At first you like the writing, then at one point you like reviews, and eventually you're addicted to reviews and they become the sole reason for still writing, don't they? A good review can make your day, a bad one destroys it, no reviews demotivate you to continue at all. It SUCKS.

    Either way, let me say something about your fic too ^^;; I think you have a wonderful feeling for language. Your sentences are well-formed, but not repetitive, and I especially like the short but powerful sentences you put at the end of every chapter. It's something that makes you think about the impact the happening of that chapter has. I also like how you change POV regularly. A POV from Pomfrey isn't something you see very often, yet it works here. Just one thing; in this last chapter, I wonder why you suddenly changed to a first person perspective. It confused me, and made no sense. Be consistent. I understand you had to give some background information on the various characters, but maybe it would've been better to do this through flashbacks... you could've matchhis his perfectly with the change of POVs: you could've flashed back to the moment where Severus' leg got hurt in the part where you look through his POV; you could've flashed back to the dramatic event over at the Burrow at the beginning of the second chapter; and so on. I think this would've worked perfectly. Otherwise, put those 2 background chapters as first chapters, it looks like you put it randomly in the story, which looks messy.

    I also saw in your LJ that you are reconsidering the pairing because you're afraid you'll mess it up... You won't. Your writing skills may not be perfect, yet you master the characters and style enough not to make it icky. I say you should go for it; worse pairings have been written by worse authors, you've got nothing to loose. Their could be something in the change of Harry that attracts Snape, no doubt of that.

    Wow, kinda lhy rhy review here. Hm, I'm sorry if I sound like I'm lecturing you; I'm not, just trying to do some suggestions. Oh, and if you consider quitting writing; you may quit this story, but if writing is in your blood, it will one day get back to you anyway and you will pick up that pencil or that word processor and write something. I know it happened to me, and I was in a worse condition than you! XD Also, one final suggestion: don't look at the amount of reviews! Look at youts. ts. Most readers don't review, yet they do read fanfics. Your hits don't show whether people have actually read your fic or just glanced at it, but the number of people who read it will always be bigger than the amount of reviews ^^

    *grabs a glass of water* I'm done now. :P I'll keep an eye on both your story and your LJ. You live in Belgium, don't you? I'm from Holland! Yay :D I hope this review helped you in one way or the other.

    -Mykerinos
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