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Reviews for The Seduction Game

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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 18, 2004
    Another great chapter, but yes, I am spoiled it was far too short for me. I have to say Lucius is such a nasty nasty man you just have to LOVE HIM!!! And I do love that Severus is there to save Hermione. I'm wondering though what's going to happen next. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Miki on April 12, 2004
    Please update. This storyline is very interesting. I neeeed moooore.

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Triospleasure on April 12, 2004
    Nice plot but youv'e made Herm just a little too stupid. Virgin yes ,stupid no. Your assuming that she would have never seen head games in a enviroment where she lived with hormonal students for 7 years.Not to mention she was a very bright student and foe of Voldy. I think she could easly see a plot directed at her.




    Then again I might be thinking too much....

    Trio



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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 12, 2004
    Chapter 6... I do hope that Hermione will start listening to her inner voice as well as the others that are telling her to be cautious where Lucius is concerned!!! I hope that Severus steps up at the ball, she might be more receptive after that dream!!! Looking forward to chapter 7, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on April 12, 2004
    I really hope Lucius is going to step in it! He is a right sexy bastard, but he doesn't deserve Hermione. Besides, she's not really that vulnerable is she?
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  • From ANON - crudedly on April 12, 2004
    hmm, you have me confused here. I mean, if Lucius is 'acting' (snort) bad again, won't that keep Hermione away from him, now? would almost be too easy for sev then. :)
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  • From ANON - crudedly on April 08, 2004
    hm, i like that! I'm not a big fan of LM/HG (though probably it's worth a try), but i'm glad i have a bit variety from all those boring SS/HG stories, that are, at least mostly, the same. Would be glad, though, if it was Severus who gets the woman in the end.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 07, 2004
    Chapter 5... I really wish Hermione would get her head out of her (_!_) & listen to what she is being told!!! When you have 3 people giving a warning, maybe there is something there that should be listened to!!! Looking forward to seeing if Severus talks to Hermione again & seeing if she will figure a few things out!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 07, 2004
    Hmm, so far I think its 2 - 0 with Lucius ahead of the game. Severus isn't doing a very good job discouraging Hermione because I think he is being too vague. Hermione is the kind of woman who neto bto be told things straight up front and with out puches being pulled. Lucius is being sublte in his seduction and I think he is catching her off guard. Of course the fact our blond bon bon is so charming helps a lot too. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Cartman on April 01, 2004
    Sweeeeet.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 01, 2004
    Chapter 4... Severus had better get into gear & start running interference here or Lucius is going to become an even bigger problem!!! Hermione may resent Severus butting in, but better that than her getting hurt!!! Looking forward to more!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 01, 2004
    I don't know whether to feel sorry for Hermione or envious. I mean who wouldn't give their right arm to have Lucius seduce them. Unfortunately he's just using her. Then you have Severus, who is hell bent on protecting her so you figure he might have some feelings for her deep down inside, but he's so closed off emotionally he may never say anything.

    I'm glad you finally got your computer up and running. I hope this means more frequent updates.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on March 14, 2004
    And the game begins! LOL I love it when Lucius and Severus both have feelings for Hermione (whether lustful or loving). I can't wait to see who will get between Hermione's legs first. Hehe. I like Severus, but Lucius is definitely the one I want to see shag Hermione senseless! *wickedly grins*
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 14, 2004
    This is getting interesting indeed. I feel both sorry and envious of Hermione. Sorry because it seems Lucius is using her for his own fun, but envious because she is obviously wanted by these two men.
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  • From ANON - Lizski on March 11, 2004
    Heehee! A very nice start here. I am a big fan of the Lucius/Severus/Hermione triangle, and am looking forward to seeing you develop this!
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