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Reviews for The Seduction Game

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  • From ANON - star on March 10, 2004
    I like it so far please update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2004
    Im down on my knees begging you not to let lucius get hold of hermione.

    please she is to smart to fall for that no matter how seductive he can be.

    please please please please please please....dont let them sleep together at least.

    im begging you..

    let ethier harry or snape stop it before it gets that far...please!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 10, 2004
    Chapters 1 & 2... Before I forget, in chapter 1 you have the date for the IMG as 2000 & then a little further on as 2004. Now, on to the review*
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  • From ANON - Shel on March 09, 2004
    Great start looking forward to more!!
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  • From ANON - ghypscee on March 07, 2004
    ohh, i can't wait for more. great start.
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  • From ANON - Mlle Gigi on March 07, 2004
    By any chance...you weren't inspired to write this story after watching "Guys And Dolls", were you? =)

    The reason why I make this observation is that the proposed bet between Lucius and Severus has more than a little similarity with that between Nathan Detroit and Sky Masterson in that story! The only difference appears to be that in this case, Sky (that is, Lucius) is proposing the bet on himself -- like Sky, Lucius has basically implied that all women are the same and his ability to seduce the woman in question is what will be tested under the terms of the bet. I'm interested in seeing how this story plays out...especially when it comes time for Lucius to get his comeuppance just like Sky did! "Daddy, I got cider in my ear!"
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  • From ANON - mary on March 07, 2004
    Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens in next chapter!
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  • From on March 07, 2004
    Wow, I just loved the first chapter! Could you please tell me whenever you update? :)
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  • From ANON - Fleur on March 07, 2004
    Wow....this seems interesting! I can't wait to read your next chapter
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on March 07, 2004
    I love it already! Lucius planning to bed Hermione...ALWAYS a good combination! LOL Please update this soon! I can't wait to see the older blonde sex machine ravish her brains out! *wickedly grins*
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 07, 2004
    Great start. And you've combined two of my favorite combinations in one. Lucius/Hermione and Severus/Hermione are my favorites since they are always so wicked and wonderfully smutty. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - agnessa on March 07, 2004
    Great story! Eagerly waiting for the continuation!
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 07, 2004
    Good start! The story is well written, but no offense meant here, you really should get a beta to catch your spelling and grammar errors. Also, it would be so much easier to read if you would break up the chapters. Other than that, great work, and I look forward to seeing where it goes! :)
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  • From ANON - jeannette on March 07, 2004
    please continue,i would love to see if lucius actually suceeds ingetting hermione.
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