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Reviews for The Seduction Game

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 17, 2004
    Great story. Creepy Lucius, lushish Severus, niaive Hermione. Great combo. More soon please.
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  • From on May 15, 2004
    Please don't let Lucius rape her!! Keep the chappies coming.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 15, 2004
    Chapter 11... I like the pace that you are taking with Severus & Hermione & I think that if they were to work their way into bed withing the next couple of chapters it wouldn't seem rushed!!! I like the fact that Severus is being as open with her as he is & is allowing her the lead!!!

    I am hoping that Lucius won't have the opportunity to hurt her!!! Had he not been so nasty with her in the 1st place he would have been able to get what he wants, but he went about it from the wrong angle!!! I hope that Severus will be able to figure out what he is doing before it is too late!!!

    Looking forward to the next chapter & to the promised 'real action between Hermione and Severus'!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 15, 2004
    Oh man this is getting interesting. The only thing against Severus here is the fact he's not being totally honest with Hermione. She will probably ultimately find out about Lucius' bet, and even though Severus isn't playing his game that's how its going to look. I see some stormy times coming, but I've got an umbrella so I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - weiweimuimui on May 15, 2004
    omg this is the maddest stori on earth!! wuht r u waiting for?!! RITE!! RITE RITE!! im waiting!!! impatientli i may add!!! come on!!!!!!!!!! pleaaaaaaaaase!~!!! i wanna noe wuht happens!!!!!!!!!!!11
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  • From shellylynnc on May 11, 2004
    Nice chapter. I like the conversation between them before the kiss. She tries to explain the last kiss away but can't. They seem to have gotten very close maybe a bit quickly here. Hermione says 'we' haven't a chance' I picture her more of saying 'there'shinghing 'I' can do' and then Snape telling her how to keep safe....good job.
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  • From ANON - Aman  on February 19, 1920
    well well

    is'nt this a great story! (i mean it!, it's great)
    i always like stories which involve proffesor Snape!
    please update soon :D

    love,
    amanda
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  • From ArachneNonafel on May 10, 2004
    I have been keeping up with this story since the first though I have not always not always commented. It is a wonderful tale that I hope to enjoy for a while yet. Please continue to write. OK? Thanks!
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  • From shellylynnc on May 10, 2004
    I've really enjoyed your story so far. I'm on chapter 9 and posting while I have time. Love Snape and Lucius and you do them both very well. The tongue question was great and I'm gland Hermione and Snape conversed on it for a while before he kissed her. The note from Malfoy was a nice touch too, completely unexpected. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 10, 2004
    Chapter 10... I do hope that Hermione will be able to stay clear of Lucius during the rest of the confrence!!! If she stays around Severus, Lucius really shouldn't be much of a problem!!!

    I wasn't sure where you were going with Hermione's line of questioning about the kiss!!! I had started to think that she was going to tell him that it was a mistake, but I'm glad that they got that all cleared up in the end!!!

    Looking forward to seeing what else Lucius will try as well as hoping that we will be seeing the relationship between Severus & Hermione grow!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - the Ascendant on May 07, 2004
    How can you leave us like that?!
    You better update soon....I mean it.
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  • From ANON - random reviwerer on May 03, 2004
    Yay! Angst and implied future smut! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 03, 2004
    Chapter 9... Severus earned some major brownie points in this chapter!!! Not only did he allow her to take the lead, but he took her to her roomroom & didn't take advantage... she had better pick him!!!

    The note from Lucius sounds a bit troubling & I hope that Hermione will show it to Severus!!! What is it that Lucius feels that she 'OWES' him?!? Why does he think that "OW"OWES' him anything?!?

    Looking forward to finding out what happens next!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on May 02, 2004
    Wow, I just read all 9 chapters and I love your story! It's so wonderful, and the characters so real, please update soon, I would love to read more :)
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  • From ANON - crudedly on May 02, 2004
    tsk, bad lucius! The kiss was nice, although it's unbelievable how long Severus needed to kiss her! :)
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