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Reviews for Written in Blood

By : Corinna
  • From ANON - iccle mousie the potions ingredient on March 08, 2004
    more soon, please!
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  • From ANON - iccle mousie the potions ingredient on March 08, 2004
    more soon, please!
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  • From ANON - cd on March 08, 2004
    hi, didn't think the lemony goodness would come so soon, but i sure enjoyed it.
    bye
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  • From ANON - cd on March 08, 2004
    hi, didn't think the lemony goodness woulg come so soon, but i sure enjoyed it.
    byr
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  • From ANON - Areola on March 08, 2004
    So there ARE women who come by penetration alone? Not to mention, super women who come througthinthing but nipple stimulation?? Well, now I know I'ven ten thoroughly fucked up. *Still somewhat suspicious, but also green with jealousy*
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 08, 2004
    This is in response to one of the above reviews by Aerola. Yes, some women can come by only stimulation of their nipples. It's not just a man's myth. *ROLLS EYES* Frankly, I am one of the women who can come by penetration alone. In fact, I find it very hard to come at all through clitoral stimulation. I have also been blessed enough to come through nipple stimulation alone, also.

    Just because you are not blessed in that way, Aerola, does not mean all women aren't.

    That being said - Apologies to all! I thought I would defend the dear author's sexual writings! Congrats on a great story, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing where it goes!
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 08, 2004
    Fantastically well written! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - risi on March 08, 2004
    Well, I've been reviewing over at FFN, but when I realized there was more over here and probably more graphic too I decided asteasten on ove rea read and review here too. If Snape's mother is right about his becoming more fertile as he gets closer to the deadline then Hermione is likely pregnant. Now he'll have to find some way to get her to marry him and somehow I don't think Hermione is going to put her child's name on that contract. I look forward to seeing how they get out of it. But first, how will they look at things and each other in the morning.
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  • From ANON - Rinkelbel on March 08, 2004
    A really wonderful story. An extrem nice plot and idea! Please write more soon, I'm begging you!!!!
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  • From mbassan on March 08, 2004
    I have finished reading what there is of the story about an hour ago (then I had to attend some other businesses of mine) and am back to review it now.

    I am now sure that my first impression was indeed accurate and your story is as good as I thought it is :-).

    I love your sense of humor, the way it is based on the characters' canonical flaws:
    -Snape's bad temper and looks and how things are viewed by his surroundings when he slowly and very believably begins to change. I especially loved the scene when he looked into the mirror on the public toilet, glaring at his reflection in hope to subdue his skin into rosy freshness (or something. This one was simply hilarious!)
    -Hermione being an overzealous student, screaming at Snape she can't brew the Puiceuice Potion he had ordered the class to brew, then fainting.
    -Ron's accented glee over winning Hermione in chess, then his reaction to Snape moderated change, having to retreat into using "git" instead of "greasy git", followed by his very canonically illustrated jealousy and his teasing an bantering of Hermione.

    One thing that really bothered me was Dumbledore's hinting and even (!) encouraging Snape to use Hermione as breeding stock (sorry, there's no other term). I cannot believe Dumbledore woulprovprove of student/teacher relationship, whatsoever- encourage it! It would be much more reasonable to have Dumbledore warning Snape against using Hermione in order to assure the continuation of the Snape dynasty.

    I was really glad to realize Snape wasn't considering Hermione as a breeding stock. When he invited her to his chambers and poured champagne I thought it might be the case and that he's actually trying to seduce her, but was relieved to be proven wrong! *breath with relief* It's much sweeter and romantic this way.

    The sex scene was superb- one of the first HG/SS sex scene in quite some time that made me remember it's actually sex and not an attempt to document the honeysuckles eating habits (sea under: Snape sipped the sweet nectar from the dewy folds of Hermione's moistened flower- then they danced a dance as old as time etc), giving the fleshy, juicy feeling of real sex. I believe is los lots to do with the intensity of the situation (the last two weeks of the last month!) and your partial willingness to describe the results of Hermione's inexperience- which is good, of course
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  • From ANON - SJL on March 08, 2004

    I really adore this story, it's one of the best I'e read in a while and I'm really looking forward to more. Hermione calling Snape 'Professor' even during sex - and him liking it - made the sex even hotter. Great i Jus Just yummy.

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  • From ANON - Areola on March 08, 2004
    I have just finished reading chapter one, and just wanted to let you know how extremely enjoyable this story is. I have read several depictions of Snape's mother as cruel, sadistic witch ("witch" being the operative word, of course) but this is so far the best.

    Your Selima is the cleverest written, funniend mnd most credible Mrs. Snape I had the chance to read so far. The wicked witcf thf the West, perhaps Hansel and Gretel's witch, perhaps Gregory Maguire's Elphaba) comes to life in the most vivid, convincing way.

    "Selima" is a bit strange choice of a name. Is there any meaning behind it?

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  • From ANON - booklvr on March 07, 2004
    Yum. More sex please!
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  • From ANON - booklvr on March 07, 2004
    Yum. More sex please!
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on March 07, 2004
    I have been reading this at fanfiction.net (up to chapter3) and was trilled to find that there were 3 more chapters here....I love your story.....please please update soon.
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