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Reviews for Angelica's Sorrow

By : devsgma
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - SFPANTHER on January 13, 2005
    Great story. Had me crying at the end. It was wonderfully written and kept me drawn to it, Yes it took me all day to read it and I look forwards to reading more stories by you.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on July 21, 2004
    I am wary of reading long fan fics... I find that most bore me as the authors often do not have the discipline to keep the pace of a long story as they can a short story, so I initially only read the epilogue. What I read made me cry and I just had to go to the beginning of the story and read the entire thing. You are truly a gifted writer, you can make the reader care about your characters, even if some are borrowed! I am going to have to read more of your work now!!! The poem was a beutiful thing, that is what convinced me to read your entire story.
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  • From ANON - Titania on July 05, 2004
    Wow!

    I've been working on my novel for the last few weeks and hadn't been reading any fics. Yours was the first I reread and finished.

    It was a wonderful story! You are a gifted writer indeed and I enjoy your work.

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes and I cried even harder when I read it was written by you for your brother. Please accept my most sincere condolences and prayers for peace and future happiness for you and yours.

    Live long and prosper!
    Titania
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on July 01, 2004
    The poem was beautiful. So sad and full of emotion. A fitting end to a wonderful story. Thank you for taking the time to write it.
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  • From ANON - Filodea on July 01, 2004
    You made me cry! I have enjoyed the story, and the poem was perfect. I have had some threads like that in my life. My grandparents, my parents, an older sister, and a close family friend. I would like to copy the poem for my own collection. It is beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on June 30, 2004
    Epilogue... Behind, yes, but I had every intention of coming back to read your story!!! I am sitting here in tears, this chapter is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! I am hoping that you will write a sequel to this in the near future!!! Your poem is PERFECT & I would very much appreciate it if I could use it in a scrapbook about my mom, please let me know if it's okay? Thank You for sharing your story!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb (the other Deb) on June 30, 2004
    I followed this story from the very first and waited with baited breath for the Epilogue. My very favourtie part of the Epilogue was the butterflies. In Aztec lore (ah, love researching my ancestors, bloody as they were!), the butterflies were the souls of the dead, returned to visit the living. So, even with their nastly, bloody history, the Buterfly was one of the most revered creatures of the Aztecs. Don't know if that's what you intended, but it fit beautifully.
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  • From ANON - Jess on June 30, 2004
    Wow. All I can say... That poem is so absolutely beautiful! It'sgoodgood to see works finished, but sad, too... because I never want them to end! Good job!
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  • From ANON - jonelin on June 30, 2004
    i'm so sorry to hear about your brother. ~hugs~

    a bittersweet and fitting ending to a fabulous story! i can't wait to see the next installment from you, my dear! :)
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  • From ANON - Princess on June 29, 2004
    Wow, this is a great fic, I love that you decided that Angelica was going to finally pass on. Good choice. Can't wait for more. Keep up the amazing writing!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on June 28, 2004
    Chapters 36 & 37... I have been EXTREMELY busy with company, refinancing a other things & I have gotten WAAAAAAAAAAY behind!!!

    These 2 chapters are INCREDIBLE!!! I am hoping that with Angelica's unknowing aid that Harry will get better & then leave Hermione alone!!!

    I feel so bad for Severus!!! I know that he understands why Angelica wanted to be free, but I can only imagine the pain & hurt that he must be feeling!!! I am hoping that blowing up Salazar Slytherin's rooms will help a bit, but it will never be enough to make him forgive what Salazar did to Angelica!!! I am glad to see that he was able to have the time he did with her & I do wish that she would have waited for the wedding!!!

    Can't wait to see what will happen next!!! Til chapter 28, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Midnight Tiger on June 28, 2004
    Oh my, you have me crying again!!! I understand her desire to go but...I feel as if I, too, have lost a friend. How will Hermione react? or will Harry's condition over power that sorrow? Will poor Severus get through it and still ask Hermione to marry him? ::sigh:: so many questions. I need to go spend some time snuggled on the couch with my two friends, Ben and Jerry (chocolate and lots of it!) and think a bit. thanks so much for posting. ::huggs::
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  • From ANON - Jess on June 27, 2004
    Finally! I was able to get to this point! (After AFF went down for a few days, I was wondering, LOL) Anyway, wonderful story! I can't wait to finish it! It's really kind of odd; the first part was wonderfully written. You then seemed to lose what you were heading for, but only for a few chapters, but now, at this point, everything is becoming cohesive again. Again, wonderful job! I can't wait the the next chapter!
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