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Reviews for Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

By : Kyizi
  • From ANON - ArienAstera on May 10, 2004
    Hey!! This is a really good story. I had to reread it bacause it took along time for you to update. And no wonder!! Chapter 3 is like a million years long!! This is not a complaint, just a suggestion... if you are going to write chapters *that* long, you might want to consider splitting them up into multiple chapters. It might intimidate people into not reading the story. And they really should because its good! But I was almost didn't read it until I found it on LNLS in 2 long chapters instead of one really, really long chapter. Just a suggestion though, I love the story!!
    ArienAstera
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  • From ANON - Siobhan on May 10, 2004
    Keep up the good work this is a truly interesting story and I can't wait for more.

    I noticed in the third chapter when Snape was summoned you said that wormtail was there but I thought he was dead?

    Ah well even the best of us make mistakes!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - stargazer starluver on May 08, 2004
    hey is this story posted in ff.net? i just asked coz i can't find it... i love your plot... i love sev's character and harry and hermione's relationship... good t you you did not make harry a snobby spoiled brat because i hate it whenever he is portrayed like that! nice work! updte!
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  • From ANON - Becca on May 07, 2004
    Your fic is absolutely incredible!!! Please keep writing! Its refreshing to find someone who actually develops the plot and seems to truly understand the characters - Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Sexy Kitten on April 14, 2004
    Hey,
    I like the story. When is the next chapter going to be up?? Hermione and Severus are so meant for each other so
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  • From ANON - olka-polka on April 06, 2004
    Why did you stop? Your story is beatiful. I like e ple plot, your witty and talented Hermion and sacarstic Snape... Oh, please,update ASAP!!!!! I'll be waiting for you every day at AFF :)
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 21, 2004
    Just found your story and finished both chapters in one sitting. Fantastically well written! Nice storyline and lots of nice humor thrown in. I love how you've portrayed both Hermione and Severus. They seem very true to canon and not much, if at all, out of character. Definitely looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - AJS on March 21, 2004
    This is stunningly good. Completely involving. Thanks you.
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  • From ANON - N- on March 21, 2004
    I adore this. I've read it somewhere else and was disappointed to see there was only the one chapter but reread it anyway. It's excellent even the second time around. There's not a thing to complain about! Your style is a joy and the story itself is compelling. I hope you do more soon! Bonus points for having a title that nods to The Police and *also* makes complete sense in relation to the story itself.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 11, 2004
    This is great fun. Please write more soon.
    I can't wait to see how Ron Har Harry react to Hermione being a professor. And perhaps you can explain more about what a Hermante' is. And how is Severus involved?
    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on March 11, 2004
    I love it! It's fantastic! I can't wait to see what happens! It's hilarious, really. "It must be the hair" hahahahaha. And I love your plot line... Hermione's jump from sixth year to teacher might seem far-fetched but you make it very believable. !!!!!! It's great. Definitely. Have I said that already? I think that means I like it. I'm going to stop now before I repeat myself sixty more times. UPDATE
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on March 11, 2004
    Amaziegineginning. Really looking forward to more of this.
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  • From ANON - bansidh on March 11, 2004
    Intriguing stuff. I was hooked from the point where you said that you hadn't read much SS/HG stuff. I really enjoy your Minerva and Severus. This piece seems ambitious and I wish you great good luck in following up this fantastic first chapter with a complete, cogent story. It does appear that all the bits are here for one. Can't wait to read updates! Thanks for writing. (Title's good too--love the Police!)
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  • From ANON - AJ on March 11, 2004
    Oh, this is wonderful. Forgetting to breathe kind of wonderful. Please say that you have this written and ready to post regularly? Please?
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  • From ANON - uscarchie on March 11, 2004
    is good! Continue! :)
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