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By : h0lden
  • From ANON - Meghan on April 26, 2004
    Hey! I must see the outcome of the bet. Can they make love all night!? :D
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  • From ANON - Meghan on April 25, 2004
    ooooooo no you can not leave us there

    more now!


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  • From ANON - sharkdiver on April 24, 2004
    NOOOOOOO! He can't hate her!!! Make it stop!!!! LOL, great chapter...anxiously awaiting more

    ~Sharkdiver
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on April 24, 2004
    Holden,

    Thank you so much for dedicating chapter 16 to me. I LOVED it! After reading chapter 17 tonight my family was treated to a repeat performance of my reaction to the now infamous " Perfume Incident ". Only this time while almost killing myself I managed to involve the dog. I was once again trying to grope my way the bathroom having been blinded by my mascara when I failed to notice the dog lying on the floor by my desk lets just say that there was a GASP , a YELP, and a really loud THUD! I tripped over the dog and went ass over teacups onto the floor. There I was sprawled out in front of the desk laughing like a lunatic mascara and tears running all over my face and the dog wanninnning away from me like his ass was on fire! Once I gained enough control over myself to open my eyes I looked up to see my husband looming over me just shaking his head as he started bending over to scrape me up off the floor. I can't even try to explain what was so funny becauveryvery time I try I turn into a complete idiot losing all of my physical and verbal abilities. Once again * KUDOS *! The part where Severus is scalded by the hot water in the shower Damn near killed me (and the dog!) and * SNORT * Picturing snape all scrunched up in the linen cupboard sent me into another fit of laughter that further confirmed my husbands suspisions that I am well on my way to becoming a permanent resident at the nearestby Hby Hatch! Thank you for now giving me TWO of the best laughing fits I have ever had.
    ~ Jaimie ~

    PS OMG!! That cliffhanger may end up being what does me in!! That was just so... so... CRUEL!!! Please post more soon! Do you think they will let me have my computer in the rubber room ?
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  • From ANON - Miki on April 23, 2004
    I want to slap Hermione, she is such a coward. But that is what makes this story so fun. MORE!!!! PLEEEAAASE!!
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  • From ANON - sammis on April 18, 2004
    this is a great story! keep it coming
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  • From ANON - Becky on April 18, 2004
    I love this story. But Pansy is a little witch! I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on April 17, 2004
    I have been engrossed in your story all evening and I'll have you know that it took me Damn near forty five minutes to recover after reading the scene that describes the " Perfume Incident " Okay now you can add another ten minutes to that! ( It just hit me again when I was thinking about it ) I almost killed myself when I read it the first time. I almost choked to death and then when I stopped choking I was laughing so hard that the tears in my eyes made my mascara run rendering me almost completely blind ! As if that weren't bad enough I almost broke my neck trying to grope my way into the bathroom all the while I was hysterical and unable to explain myself to the people looking at me like I had just lost my mind! * KUDOS * That was the funniest thing I have ever read.The mental picture painted into my brain was ... Well, I can't find the words ... GREAT! now on top of all I mentioned above you have succeded in making me speechless! ( Which is no small feat as my husband could assure you ! ) I LOVED this story! I hope you never stop writing because you have a true gift! I Can't wait to read the rest so please please post more ASAP!!!!!! BTW Thank you for giving me one of the best laughing fits I have ever had in my life.

    ~ Jaimie ~

    PS I forgot to mention that my back side is in agony because I literally fell off my chair and landed on it!
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on April 17, 2004
    Oh no. That stupid, stupid little bitch. Ugh. She's going to ruin everything!
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  • From ANON - Meghan on April 17, 2004
    I read the whole story in one sitting starting at 6 am this morning and ending around 9 30 am.

    Hee... I absolutely loved the premise and its execution!

    You must have more written very soon! I'll be waiting anxiously for the update.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on April 16, 2004
    Hmm...you've got me wondering what Pansy's going to resort to now...
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  • From ANON - Denali on April 16, 2004
    Argh! Why do I feel I've read this before (and no, I'm not claiming you "stole" it from someone, just that I feel like I've read YOUR fic before)? Is it on any other sites in a completed or more completed version? It's driving me nuts! Oh well, I shall just continue to readhas I love every minute of this.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on April 11, 2004
    Damn straight that's not the last she's going to see of him! Okay, I understand why you had her kick him out. She's all emotional over the Pansy thing and Snape hiding his feelings about her until then, but is an itty bitty lemon soon so much to ask for? Is it?
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  • From ANON - Sohara on April 08, 2004
    ohohoh pansy is such a lying bitch. oh god is the harm irreversible? please say no please say no. Will Hermione and Severus end up together? Please say yes please say yes *looks up pleadingly*

    and yeah did i say you have a great story here : )
    Cheers !!
    Sohara
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  • From ANON - Amanda on April 07, 2004
    Wow! That was great! I do hope you continue! Please, please, pleaseee continue! I really enjoyed it! So, please, keep going! I'll be waiting...
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