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Reviews for Dreams and consequences

By : happyinslc
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on September 27, 2004
    It is a pity that you never finished this story. It is really quite good! ^_^
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 14, 2004
    Well crud! To short, I want more! Soon please.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 13, 2004
    Want more? You're kidding right? Of Course! and very mean of you to end it there. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 13, 2004
    More, more, are you serious? Of course I want more. I want Filch to get caught, I want to know what Flitwick wanted to give Hermione, I especially want to know what comes after the kiss. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - innogen on June 13, 2004
    OOOoh! Yes! I want more! Please? Uhm....not sure about twists... Filch should probably give himseway.way....maybe the love potion he used backfired and instead of her falling in love with him, it allowed her to accept the idea that she could love Severu despite the obstacles between them. Filch is ichy. But he probably thought all he needed to do was touch her when he grabbed her in the hallway for detention or something. However, she spent much more meaningful time with Professor Snape. So, it could be a sort of "open your heart to me" potion....something that only works if there is already feelings there to begin with? (I'm borrowing partly from another fanfic for the name of the potion....but if the potion only works if there were feelings there to begin with....the "antidote" as it were....should be the consumation of the physical intimacy, which would also be some kind of soul/love binding as well...since it *is* a love potion and not a lust potion. So, if Severus takes her to bed, he had best figure out what has been going on with the youg woman. BTW, I just saw POA, and even at 13, Hermione is growing up fast. I hope she never really gets together with Ron....he is so thick! So, have these ideas been helpful? Feel free to email me. --Innogen Innogen_Cray@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 12, 2004
    Great story for a first timer. You are more brave than I. Also a dang better writer than I...I think it's a wonderful story. Haven't seen anything like it. Love the twisted way things have been set up. Course it gives me the shivers to think of Filch and Hermione. What can I say other than ew...Looking forward to seeing more and where you take us and how you get there. More soon please.

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 11, 2004
    Poor Hermione. What's a girl to Th Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 07, 2004
    Ahhhh, what's going to happen next? Is Filch going to be found out? I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Maddy on March 20, 2004
    Hi there,

    I really have to say that I like your fic, eventhough it's your first one. You do a much better job than I did with my first. Hell, I still have to finish that one.

    To answer your high qualified question,

    How old am I? ---> For the fic I guess Hermione is 18 because of the time turner. As in knowing you personally, I thought you were 28. ;-)

    Who is my fantasy? ---> For the both of you, SNAPE.

    Should I keep writing? ---> Hell yes! Don't think of stepping out now.

    What do you think should happen next? ---> I'll sit and patiently (not) wait.

    Love and a hug, Maddy




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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on March 15, 2004
    Your story is very interesting.....each chapter ends in ways that make me want the next chapter NOW...which i think is a good thing.......my suggestion for you is to make Hermione and SNape fall in love.....which is my suggestion for any HG/SS story....your ideas are good....I can honestly say I have not read this before......and I want Filch to get in so much trouble that they will be collecting his pieces off the great hall walls.....ooops......i typed that didn't I?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 14, 2004
    Just one small suggestion. The story would be easier to read if you could separate the paragraphs. Ioks oks too bunched up. Other than that its rather nice so far. I'm glad she admitted to Oblivating his memory, although I'm not sure why she did it in the first place.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on March 13, 2004
    wow...great story...can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 12, 2004
    I'm surprised she obliviated him, but if you are asking for suggestions as to where to go from here you could always have her stay in his quarters and have her tell him he invited her there for a "talk". Maybe she could explore those dreams on her last night at the school.
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