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Reviews for Pre-Ordained

By : Erradhadh
  • From ANON - twichy on December 24, 2006
    i am really freakin confused... its good... but really cofusing
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  • From ANON - haz on October 09, 2005
    hi

    'mazing story

    wow it is rele gud

    n i think harry shud be in slytherin too...

    wen will ur next update be?

    thanx
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  • From ANON - Sianna Silver on July 10, 2004
    I love this story, please update soon! Pretty Please!
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  • From Lilium on June 12, 2004
    Wow, this is confusing. It's really good though, poor Draco! Poor Harry! I can't wait til the next chappie! Please can you email me when you update? Thanks.
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  • From ANON - meeeee on June 07, 2004
    What in the buggering hells was THAT?! Well, you've done it. I'm thouroughly confused. And I had hope for you. tut tut tut
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  • From ANON - Clevershade on June 02, 2004
    Now post, damn it!
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  • From ANON - Clevershade on June 02, 2004
    I like the sex scene. *smirk*
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  • From ANON - EEEK! on June 02, 2004
    tell me wat happens now....!!!!!!!!!!!1 *waiting unpatientlt*
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  • From ANON - Mouse on May 29, 2004
    Chapter.... There thats 5 reviews its up to the rest of u pricks to bring in the next chapter
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  • From ANON - mouse on May 29, 2004
    This
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  • From ANON - mouse on May 29, 2004
    love
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  • From ANON - mouse on May 29, 2004
    Absolutely
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  • From ANON - Mouse on May 29, 2004
    I
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  • From ANON - Jerrica on May 28, 2004
    I'm confused. Harry's behaviour is leteletely random. Why did he run out of Sly Slytherin dorms? Why was he there to begin with? Was Ron actually undressing Hermione in the common room, or were they in a dorm? And if so, why? What was that stunt with the fake Slytherin robes? How is Harry supposed to survive in Slytherin, if Voldemort is still around and the House is full of Death Eater children (who might very well be Death Eaters themselves, seeing as Draco's one)? Does this mean that Ha's f's forgiven Draco for lying, I mean, why else would he take up residence in his House? Will Harry turn Dark? Will he join Voldemort? I sure never understood fics that had him do that. Seriously, the man (if he is indeed a man) killed his parents! Why, oh why, would he join him? Doesn't make any kind of sense. Sadly, neither do parts of this fic. You, as the writer, might understand fully well why your characters (or in this case, your version of JKR's characters) act the way they do, but you have to make sure to put those reasons into writing, so that we, the readers, might understand, too. Then again, maybe I'm being daft. Maybe it's all perfectly understandable. Ah, well...
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  • From ANON - Shenoa on May 25, 2004
    Please tell me you're going to update soon, yes? Pretty please? lol
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