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Reviews for Pre-Ordained

By : Erradhadh
  • From ANON - Elmo on May 14, 2004
    That was really good I hope you updates soon. KEEP WRITING GOOD STORIES PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!
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  • From ANON - Shenoa on May 11, 2004
    Don't wanna be hexedherehere's my review lol. That was so sad. You've gotta post more so Draco isn't left in misery for too long. And poor Harry! First time he trusts it blows up in his face. Doesn't feel good. Make it happy again? Pretty pretty please lol
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  • From ANON - RedSharpie on May 08, 2004
    -glare- Thats it?! WELL?! I want more. Now give it up. I know theres SOMETHING in there! -grumble-
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  • From ANON - RedSharpie on May 08, 2004
    Oh my... wow... great story, but you are incredibly cruel...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2004
    CLIFFIE!!!
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  • From ANON - Hayley on April 24, 2004
    omg!!! that was SO GOOD!!! ahh!!!!! i luv it so far! update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Keikokin on April 23, 2004
    They had sex...in...the hallway! :::::::::::::::passes out::::::::::::::::shakes head Whoa. How does Draco know that no one will find out? And will Harry finally ditch Hermione PLEASE dont have him hurt Draco get the boys together again cause that was HOT wheww doggie! damn.
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  • From ANON - ammie on April 20, 2004
    this fanfiction was really supenseful, could you please write some more, i would love to read it!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on April 20, 2004
    Your story is too disjointed and confusing for me to follow easily. However, you have a good plot idea (so far) and I like your dialog.
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  • From ANON - Shayne on April 19, 2004
    Uh, I hate to ask this, but did you really write the sex scene? It's just...in an earlier chapter you mentioned that you had never written a sex scene before and in the scene in Ch. 7 at one point you refer to "Aye" and "redhead" which is Weiss Kreuz, if I'm not mistaken. So, unfortunately, that brings me back to my question. Now, I don't like to accuse people of plagiarism....but did you take it from someone else's fic?
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  • From ANON - Galia on March 26, 2004
    Bah! Humbug! I love it...but why aren't more ppl reviewing this wonderful piece of work...
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  • From ANON - Keikokin on March 24, 2004
    wow so Draco lied about being on the side of the good guys to get Harry in bed. Damn. Harry isn't going to like this. BUT maybe Draco will join up to KEEP HARRY!
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  • From ANON - lou on March 23, 2004
    you lost me in the 4th chapther but good story. Did he run off wdracdraco or was it a dream of dracos.
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  • From ANON - Meethveth on March 22, 2004
    Please continue with this story. It was just getting interesting. What happens when Mione finds out that Harry was using her for a cover? Why did draco choose the light side in this story?

    waiting for updates,
    Merrideth
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  • From ANON - Clevershade on March 18, 2004
    ohhh that was great next chapter please hehe
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