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Reviews for Stormwalker

By : LordOfTheFallen
  • From ANON - angie on April 10, 2004
    I really enjoyed this fanfic! It's really good and I hope you will continue with the story. I guess Hermione has a shared past with Gabriel in her previous life, thus the 'connection' that she has with him. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    Aw, I thought it was D/Hr with the grey eyes, but oh well!
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on April 09, 2004
    Good. More please.
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  • From ANON - Jynn on April 09, 2004
    This story is kewl. i usually only like DH but this is a really good fic update soon please

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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 30, 2004
    A very nice hook, you lay layered the clues well up front, and Gabriel is an intriguing OC. Herm's 's fascination and their connection is going to be delightful to explore. I loved your ending line to Chapter 4... 'he was sure that he had...' Ah, he may have been sure, but did he? I can hardly wait to see.

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  • From ANON - Belladonna on March 20, 2004
    This is a fabulous story - and oh so deliciously dark. I hope you keep it that way
    Bella
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  • From ANON - Fury on March 17, 2004
    Ooo yeah. This is definitely a story worth pursuing, in case you're having any doubts, I *love* the vamp thing... If he's going to teach them to survive, perhaps 'Mione could have an edge ? Something along the lines of previous fighting/physical trng tng to balance out the intensity with which she hones her mind ?

    Just a suggestion, whatever you do, I'll be waiting to read the next part :)

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - jeannette on March 17, 2004
    i like your story,it's very interesting.please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ryo on March 16, 2004
    This is a very engaging story you've got going here. I honestly can't find anything that merits constructive criticism, because you're doing it quite well. The dialogue reads how people normally talk, the narrative flows smoothly, the grammar--THANK GOD YOU'VE GOOD GOD GRAMMAR!!!! :-) All in all, I'm hooked, and ready to see where you'll take us in this journey. :-)

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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 16, 2004
    Yeah, go Hermione. MMMmmm vampires are so sexy. This story is great. More please.
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  • From ANON - Chels on March 16, 2004
    Whoa! That was awesome! I can't wait to find out what's happening to the Professor! I also want to know what happened with that book Harry was looking at! Wicked story!
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  • From WriterLady1031 on March 15, 2004
    Wow. That was amazing. I would absolutely love to read more of this. The details and characterizations thou hou have set up are really good--bloody fantastic really--and you've already got some drama going on. That is perfect. I can't hardly wait to read more. You're off to a good start with this.

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 15, 2004
    Oooo, he's a vampire. Hermione...Hermione...Hermione...what is it with you and bad boys.
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  • From ANON - DevilPrincess on March 15, 2004
    Interesting.... never read a fic with quite this plot. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 15, 2004
    Great story. Can't wait to find out who Gabriel is. Go Hermione! More please.
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