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Reviews for Snapey Went A Courting

By : Avrild
  • From ANON - Meg on March 21, 2004
    This is quite funny!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on March 20, 2004
    Interesting turn of events here... House Elves issue, eh? Hmmm. Snickered aloud at this: "She had a Caesar salad? No um, Caesar section, something like that, he still has terrible handwriting." Great comedy! I can see why you wanted something lighter like this after Dr. Granger, amazing how you're able to do such a great job with both types of fic!
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  • From ANON - ran on March 20, 2004
    This stuff is great! April you are good at romance, you are good at angst, and now I can see that you do awesome comedy :-) ::bows:: I am looking ard ard to reading more of this :-)
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on March 20, 2004
    April,

    I had to reread Chapter 1 before I reviewed the first time because I was a bit confused about how the pregnancy occurred myself. I caught it on the second go, so I didn't have to ask! :cD Anyhoo, I read your post and I gotta say, I hope you can update soon and clearify some of the stuff you mentioned! Especially the stuff about Harry! I'm dying of curiosity now!

    Umm, that kid's name isn't really Waldo is it? I mean Lupin was just poking fun, right! Couldn't she come up w/ a better English name like William or Phillip or James or maybe even something like Steven or Christopher. Waldo is just so geeky! Not that Severus's choice was any better! Someone give those two a baby names book! Although their choices did make for good laughs... Please update soon! Okay, now I'm begging. I'm gonna go now and stop bugging you!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on March 20, 2004
    OMG! Right now I am really not liking Hermione very much. She shows up at that bar and goes to be all nice to Snape, but unwittingly gets ked ued up because he's too drunk to know she's not interested. I don't care how miserable he is, she should have had the decency to tell him she was pregnant. Nothing pisses me off more then when one parent selfishly keeps a child away from another parent because they don't like or get along w/ them. It's not fair to the child and it's not fair to the other parent. If there was abuse involved I totally understand, but we aren't talking abuse we are talking selfish disreguard for another persons feelings. SHAME ON HER!!!

    P.S. I juanteanted to add that Snape ain't what I'd call father material, but I stand by my ear com comments.
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  • From Avrild on March 20, 2004
    Dear Becca,

    When a reviewer asks questions but doesn't leave an e-mail for me to reply to, I get the feeling that they are not sincere in their request for information. However, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt here.

    You wrote:
    exactly just how did Hermione get pregnant when all he did was cum on her hand? And why is she being such a bitch about not wanting to see Snape? I'm not sure about this story and typically we have Harry whhe dhe doesn't belong - let's see the shoe on the other foot and see how he'd like it if he was left out his girl having a baby.

    If you go back and read a bit more closely you will see that her hand was pretty much trapped between his cock and her crotch. And when he came:

    "A very hot, liquid sensation suddenly crawled over her crotch and hand." (from Chapter One of Snapey Went A Courting)

    Therefore, he didn't just cum on her hand. The semen flowed around her fingers and onto the very thin material of her panties, thereby allowing her to get pregnant.

    As to why she is being a bitch. She's not. She has chosen to not inform Snape of her pregnancy for reasons not yet known to the reader. Regarding Harry: he's just trying to be a good friend. If you read on you will see that he does want the father to know, because it's something he would want to know!

    All the best, April

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  • From ANON - Becca on March 20, 2004
    exactly just how did Hermione get pregnant when all he did was cum on her hand? And why is she being such a bitch about not wanting to see Snape? I'm nure ure about this story and typically we have Harry where he doesn't belong - let's see the shoe on the other foot and see how he'd like it if he was left out his girl having a baby.
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on March 20, 2004
    Waldo? I DO hope you are joking with that one...Waldo? Oh geez, next you will be dressing him in striped shirts and black rimmed glasses

    Ugh...LOL

    anyway...I DO like this story. Sounds like the beginning of the gag of the year to me!

    Red
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on March 20, 2004
    Wow, I'm actually kinda shocked that she did get pregnant. Sounds like Snape is excited about getting this ready made family. Can't wait to see how it works out. and can't wait till they start saying "Where's Waldo?"
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  • From ANON - LovesThePotionBoy on March 20, 2004
    Excellent chapter! Especially liked the duel. More please in a non-pestery way...blessings, Kait x
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on March 20, 2004
    ROTFLMAO!

    Oh my god! I have fallen so far behind on my reading it isn't funny, but this fic was pointed out to me and I am so very glad it was! *grins* I can't wait until he shows his face, sounds like Hermione will have a few choice words for him. *snickers* I guess she didn't take that bath soon enough, nor pay enough attention in sex-ed. Poor girl got the consequences without the fun!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 20, 2004
    OMG (I just had a personal flashback - yikes) great start. Looking forward to reading this playout. There is going to be more, right? I'm not above begging, thanks.
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on March 19, 2004
    Yeah, another story from April!! Too funny -- can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - shagsthedustmop on March 19, 2004
    Your drunk!Snape is hilarious - and I love the realistic "hair trigger" that he had on him.
    I'm looking forward to hearing how sht prt pregnant from having her hand humped, but I'm sure you've got something interesting in mind

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 19, 2004
    That must have been some VERY sheer cotton!!! Or are we just getting the story so far from a drunken Hermione's POV?!? Very much looking forward to chapter 2!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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