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Reviews for Swing, Swing, Swing

By : Desertrain
  • From ANON - Ellen on March 24, 2004
    Good story, but I'd like it better if you left it more open ended. Set up their relationship and then leave it up to your reader's imagination what happens later. Or better still--YOU write some more about how their relationship develops. You've got a really good beginning here. It seems a shame not to do more with it.
    :)

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  • From ANON - MJ on March 24, 2004
    Awwwww that is SO SO SO Sweet. I love it.. such a great concept. It reminds me of a poem I once read in a chicken soup book called smile. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Eimear on March 24, 2004
    Wow. That was really sweet. I think it has to be in the top ten...
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  • From ANON - fallen heart on March 24, 2004
    hey this story was cool and all i enjoy reading it make more please
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  • From ANON - Jessie on March 24, 2004
    It was so sweet, I normally don't like stories that are that cutsie, but this is one of the exceptions.

    Jessie
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  • From ANON - Kevin on March 24, 2004
    That story was truly heartwarming! Completely innocent, yet completely loving. Thank you for writing something of love and not about loving sex. I do enjoy Harry and Draco shagging, but this was a soul touching departure. Good luck with future work.

    Again, Thank you,
    Kevin
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  • From Kyizi on March 21, 2004
    And so it was that midnight found Harry Potter, Golden Boy of Gryffindor and potential saviour of the wizarding world,er her his invisibility cloak sneaking out behind the Slytherin stands to conjure a swingset.

    There is just something undeniably adorable about that sentence, and indeed this entire fic. It's unbelievable sweet.

    I've never believed in Harry/Draco fluff, I don't think it works; it's like ntrantradiction in terms, really. But this? WoW! Not very eloquent, I know, but it's all I find I can say.

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  • From ANON - emma on March 21, 2004
    that was the best piece of wrighting that i have ever read
    thank you

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  • From ANON - nightmage on March 21, 2004
    I just love your story. it was a nice change form what i main read.
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  • From Padfoot on March 20, 2004
    *Crack* My heart just broke. I
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  • From ANON - Stacy on March 20, 2004
    That was definately sweet, and I loved it. Good job
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