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By : h0lden
  • From Shellnet on April 24, 2020

    Come on you could have got it in one or two chapters if you rush its been years


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  • From Shellnet on April 24, 2020

    Come on you could have got it in one or two chapters if you rush its been years


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  • From Kallie on April 17, 2008
    BLOODY FANTASTIC! Best Snape/Hermione Story I've Read In Some Time. I Hope You Plan To Update. I Mean You Last Updated On 2004-10-23 & Last Edited 2005-01-10...That Some Time Ago. I Don't See It Listed As Complete Or A Sequel (Else I Some How Missed This). This Story Fantastic Please Update (I Fought To Keep Myself Awake To Finish Even Though I Was Falling Asleep At My Computer)Just To Finish The Hole Thing & Not Fall Asleep Wondering About The Ending.PLEASE UPDATE!. I Love This Story So Good Plus The Plot Kicks A**. Great Job!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Garbo on May 11, 2007
    dear holden, it was just such amazing when i found your story by accident three days ago and, it has been even more amazing to enjoy it by finishing reading this morning.

    i ust wonder whether the story actually ends at chapter 26, are you going to write continuelly and when we shall see what would happen next. plus, why cannot i see the 'chapter 17'? 'seemed that it's been missec here, hasn't it?

    so far it is the best one of all the harry potter fan-fiction i ever read. severus snape is my favourite character in harry potter series and it is obvious that you successfully make him more lively and lovely. thank you for the exellent fiction! and wish there'd be more fancinating stories coming next:) Garbo
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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 30, 2006
    This story is rather good but the transition between chapter 18 and chapter 19 needs some work... its jsut a bit confusing! I love it though... it seems as though you may have abandoned it... thats sad to hear but i did enjoy what was finished
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  • From ANON - Lulu Malfoy on August 14, 2006
    How could u do this to us??? U just simply dig a big hole and let us falling into it!
    Come on dear, u are really good!!!! Could u pls just finish the story in one capter????? Please...........
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - glorianne on September 20, 2005
    Where are the bunnies?!!! BRING OUT THE BUNNIES!!!!! you have update! you must, you must, you must! i'm dying! PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSEEEE! (this is me bringing out the over dramatics) i love this story, i will die without your story! bye bye! E:3 carrots
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  • From ANON - Elayne on June 11, 2005
    Oh no! Please finish this story! You can't just leave it hanging like that! *sends bunnies a sack of extra-sharp carrots*.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on March 10, 2005
    great story please update soon i love it.
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  • From ANON - Karen on March 09, 2005
    It looks like Chpt 17 is missing...past that, this story is enticing....FINISH IT!!! I'm dying, I swear I am, and I need to know the conclusion. Please don't leave me in suspense. PLEASE!!!!

    Past that, good job so far. Can't really find anything I'd suggest you change
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  • From ANON - rose on February 24, 2005
    This is such a great story! I need more! Please, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - LALA on February 21, 2005
    AUUUUUUUUUUUUUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
    THATS A HORRID HORRID ENDING!
    wonderful story
    HORRID ENDING! GRRR!
    me hopes the plot bunnies come back and bite you in the ass someday.
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